Wounderfull yet again! Loved it!

Boo! Hahaha Mean Dean. do I have a zit or something, poor Dean. To bad he didn't. Hahaa. Oh I love it!

You know, I've dislocated my shoulder several times and it does seem to hurt worse going back into place. :)

I was cringing during that scene. Ouch.

Loved the hunt, the angst, the bro bonding, the Sam owies, the humor, and the comfort. Just wonderful.

Thanks for writing!

Finally Got to read this one. O what fun this was to read. A good mix of Giggles and Suspence. I wish I could pick one line or section that I liked the most but it is to hard to choose. The banter between them was good to. Deffinantly one of those should be filmed stories.

Another Winner Friend.

Nicol

YAY! I loved the line... "Must have happened when I was putting my shoulder into it."lol :D Hehe I loved it!! Sam was funny in this one too!!Ooh how I love your stories!!

Wow, a very tense, suspenseful ending to this story.

This cracked me up: "Sammy! Come on, man, not a good time to play Houdini. Let me hear that girly scream of yours!" It was tense, yet funny--great characterization of Dean in situations like this!

You really did a good job creating a scene I could see playing out in my mind, Dean in that room, furniture falling, trying to break through the walls to get to Sam. I was so glad Sam wasn't all bloody and cut up when he got out.

I was really surprised that just smashing the chandelier took care of the ghost. I would've thought they'd have needed to salt and burn the rope or something.

This was a nice bit of detail: "Sam downed the whole flask -- Blackberry Brandy this time, last time was whiskey. He wondered which would work better -- guessing he was about to find out." This, too: "Sam could swear he was tumbling around inside a dryer, coins, lighters, knifes hitting and digging into his shoulder. He was hot and could hardly catch his breath." You did a fantastic job describing how his wound felt. Very nice bit of hurt/comfort to end on.

Loved the glimpse into their past and why Dean kept using that nickname for Sam, LOL. And it was lovely and in-character for Dean to say he wished Sam could've grown up not believing in ghosts.

Nice work! A very enjoyable story--original, suspenseful, great characterization.

For a minute or so I thought it was Dean who was taken not Sam. Haunted houses and Winchesters don't mix well.

Nice ending! You kept up the slightly comedic tone despite the obvious terror of the situation, loved the whole thing :)

Great story, I loved it!

Aww this was soo cute!! Great job my dear, as always!! While I've never had a dislocated shoulder, a friend of mine did when I was a senior in high school and he told me it was pretty awful @.o Great job of descibing that though, I thought the imagery turned out great!! Super great story, can't wait to see what you come up with next!!

-Layla ^.-

Aw, pretty sweet;)

I was really excited to see this fic in the feed, because I've had the idea of a haunted haunted house down on my list of fics to write for a while now, but have no idea when/if I'll ever get around to it, LOL. So I was happy to see that someone did one.

You did a great job setting the scene in this. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but when Dean said, "A haunted house on a hill," it made me think of the old Vincent Price movie "House on Haunted Hill," which was a great and creepy connection to make.

I LOVED the details you put in here. I could just smell the mixture of scents you mentioned. Really great use of the senses: "Dean breathed in the lingering aroma of buttery popcorn, hotdogs, cotton candy, and crunchy cheese fries."

This made me giggle: ""Dean." Sam blew out a white puff of air into the crisp Autumn night. "Always with the car."" I could totally hear Sam saying that.

And this cracked me up: "Get it, Sam." Dean elbowed his brother in the ribs. "An arm and a leg." Again, great job with characterization. This SO sounded like something Dean would say.

Loved the "Knotts Scary Farm," too. *snort*

And I loved the one-upmanship they had going on. Sam's little revenge was cute, this made me laugh: ""Sam, is there a zit on my chin?" No response. "Come on, man, tell me. Hey, wait up.""

Ooh, and nice ending, very suspenseful. Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Uh-oh, looks like someone ticked off a spirit. LOL

My lord!You have the best stories! EVER!
Grea great job!!

Yay!! Another multi-chapter!! But no!! Poor Sammy!! Please update soon!! I wanna know what happens!! @.o