Claire was 19 during RE2 and they don't look like 16 year olds. Leon and Claire smoke? So someone like Leon and Claire can look the way they do (real smokers look like s/h/i/t) and they do all the things they do (running and fighting since that takes energy and smoking takes away your energy) and they can still smoke? Yeah, right. Who the f/u/c/k would kiss someone when they smell like that?!?!? Like s/h/i/t?!?!?!

"Leon was becoming very curious about Chris Redfield"

Always have to make Chris into some type of f/u/c/king god and make Leon look like an idiot all the time?

"She was sweet and beautiful and apparently willing to lower her standards, and he suddenly wanted to dispel all her fears of dying untouched."

So Leon is just some dumbass s/h/i/t?!?!?! Man... Leon needs better fans than this... much better

Man... I remember the days when you could write such characters correctly... talk about those days being gone. So-called L/C fans like yourself (although just because you write about them, it doesn't make you a fan... not a real one) can't even get them right. A very disappointing story... it could have been written a lot better.

This was just a make-out and sex (for no reason) story... not a love story.
Why do you people say that Leon couldn't have had feelings for Ada or Claire having any for steve during the very short time they were with each... but yet in a story like this, Leon and Claire don't know each at all and yet they fall for each other and have sex in a matter of minutes... what hypocrites you people are. Although you seem far more like a L/A and C/S fan... so there's the answer to that.

Published: 06-23-09... let it stay that way because you really shouldn't be writing L/C fanfics... you can't do it right anymore

I'm SO excited for Darkside as well...and I LOVE THIS FIC! Seriously...this is just how I'd imagined Leon to be...though...portraying him like this in bed was simply...amazing. You are the AWESOMESAUCE. Officially. I grant you the Leon Master title for pwnage. I gotta make you a sign. :D His character portrayal was perfect- you hit the nail on the head...and you caught Claire just right...I'm not an advocate for smoking- but I can imagine that in the heat of the moment- they'd probably do that too. Fantastic...I hope to read more from you. :))

Holy shit! I nearly collapsed by the excitement. This is one of the best fictions I've ever read and believe, I've read them a hell of a lot! I'm shocked to see such a small amount of reviews - this would definitely deserve more attention. A lot more. Everything sits perfectly in this fic - the atmosphere, the characters, the events... Just flawless let me tell you!

It's always heart warming to find these kind of mature fics written with a high quality taste. There's so much of those teenager fics that some of them are very nice and entertaining, but this is pure art. High standards art. Whoever says fanfics are nothing but bullshit should read this. You kept the original feeling of RE in the fic, without loosing the beautiful touch with the fic. It was very believable.

I wish to see more ClairexLeon fics from you in the future, if you haven't written more this far. I haven't manage to check out it yet.

Thank you for making such an artistic and beautifully mature tasting fic for us to read! This really inspires me with my own fanfics as well as with the drawing projects.

-NiuNiu-

Wow, I remember you! You were one of the old school Cleon writers. You were one of the best, and still are! I never thought you'd come back!

By the way, this is another great Cleon story. I just love how they interact, though I did think it could use less F-words, and Claire smoking, WHAT THE HELL? Anyways, I love the sex scene at the end, hehe.

I hope you stick around and write more stories! You're a great writer!

Marvelous. I love RE2 as well, and this just made me want to whip out my gamecube.

So so so so so so LOVE CLAIRE AND LEON write more this is so good. Love Claire and Leon.
And I also adore Cleon writers they are the best. AWESOME!

WOW! That was just...unbelievable! I've got to admit, when I realised what this fic was going to be about (a night of consolation, etc.) I thought the storyline and the dialog would be cheesy as it happens most of the times. The storyline was fantastic, the feeling of horror both of the characters felt was so strong I felt a little horrified myself. The way they got together just amazed me! So breathtaking!

The thing that most surprised me though, was the dialog. It was one of the most intelligent dialogs written in a fic I've ever read! Very smart, but not unreal! I just have no words!
Seriously, only for the dialog part, I hope you win in that contest!