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anonymous
2009-08-07 . chapter 5
Okay, please ignore my last review, I wasn't paying attention and am tired so I messed up, I apologize for the mistake, I'm not focusing.

Anyway, chapter 5 is excellent and a great way to finish. I love it! I'll go look you up on youtube and Pismo beach sounds really cool! Sorry for the mix up!
anonymous
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Hey buckle, love your story, bu fifth chapter is same as first, I think you mis-updated. Just wanted to let you know! Great story! :):):):):):)
My-Friend-KITT
2009-08-05 . chapter 5
Very nice bucklewinner! I very much enjoyed it! Thumbs up!
ITman496
2009-08-04 . chapter 5
That was really good! I liked this chapter!
shadowblade-tara
2009-08-03 . chapter 5
Aw, the last chapter? That sucks, but at least you're continuing it. *smiles* This series has been great - I love the friendship bonds between Kile and Kasey. Keep running into too many love stories. Too much fluff is bad for me, and this is a welcome change. Great job once again, and I look forward to your next one! ^^
anonymous
2009-07-29 . chapter 4
wow! I love it!! I've thrown eggs in the fire!, some explode, some don't anyway great story! Sequel idea, what if when Kasey gets back to school, a new guy is in town, and the two start rubbing into each other, good or bad. Just a thought! These stories are awesome! :):):):):):):):):)
ITman496
2009-07-29 . chapter 4
Yeah, the nitrous and kerosene makes sense, because nitrous is an oxidant, and kerosene is a fuel, so yeah ^^
moose
2009-07-13 . chapter 2
hurry up get the next chapters done so i can read them!
uug ug good job on this chapter. i like the part were “Kile, can you open a sunroof, please?”

“Of course.” He transformed the roof with the nanoskin to make a square window which opened automatically.

“Thanks.” Kasey stood up in the seat and out the window. She yelled in the direction of the other three trucks, “What’s the matter? Chicken?” She laughed as she saw all four trucks rev their engines in response.

Ki2t used his outside speakers to project his voice, “We’ll go once you guys get out of the way!” He said with humor in his voice.

that was funny. now hurry up and get the next chapters done please good job and good luck on your stories!
moose
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
great job its fun reading your stories and i want to read more stories that you write. excellent job keep up the good work!
My-Friend-KITT
2009-07-12 . chapter 2
Very Fun!
I am enjoying it!
Keep it up!
anonymous
2009-07-09 . chapter 2
interesting! Please continue! Very nice story and I can't wait to read more! :):):):):):)
shadowblade-tara
2009-07-09 . chapter 2
And yet another awesome chapter! *hugs you* You do some great stuff, I can't wait to see future chapters. Kile and Kasey are the best.
My-Friend-KITT
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
Bucklewinner,

This is a wonderfully fun chapter.
I like it!
Keep it up...

And don't forget...
Billy doesn't like to be outside...

"I rash up." He told Sarah at the beach in Mexico. Remember, he was hyperventilating...I laughed so hard during that.

So this will be interesting. :)

Keep updating when you can...
MFK
shadowblade-tara
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
Yes! Another story! I guess I owe Kile one for dragging this out of you . . . how do you pay back a car?

Either way, great start, and I would love to see more.
darkboy90
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
This story was fun to read. It was awesome. On the sequals thing maybe you could do a story where Micheal and Mike are giving Kasey some training and she gets frustrated or bored with the training and tells them she want to quit. Kile talks her into finishing the training. I don't know if you want to take my idea or not but whatever.
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