That was lovely - I don't know how I missed it before - sad though

Excellent job. Perfect take on what Fiyero was going through between acts 1 and 2- and I don't know if you stuck in the little hints of bookverse on purpose or not (reference to an abandoned warehouse, etc.), but it was a very nice touch.

Wow. You're an excellent writer, you know that? It's not often I've seen anyone try and get into Fiyero's head, and here you've tried and it's worked, brilliantly, and without being cheesy (thank you). And I like how you've put a bit of the book's mood in here- did you mean to do that, or am I just reading it that way? Either way, what I mean is that it seems a little bit dark to me, and that shows off nicely how Fiyero is the un-glittery realistic half of Oz's golden couple.

Well done! Thank you.