This was an amazing story! The bond between Ed and Al are truly that of best friend and brother. Very well written, with plenty of plot twists in the midst of it!
And the outtakes! I was cracking up the whole time xD!
You should definitely write more of them xDD

awesomely funny! elric got pwned! you should write crack-fics. the outtakes were funny.

"I traded my arm for my brother's soul," Ed said gently, "not his face."

God, I loved that line...♥

This was an amazing story. I'm sorry I couldn't review right when each chapter came out, but know that I was eagerly reading all the way through. You have a real talent for conveying what brotherhood means.

I LOVED the angst when Ed slowly came to realize the person he thought was Al really wasn't, and the real Al listened to it, then came out and revealed the truth. That was a really powerful scene, and you captured the brothers' mannerisms and ways of talking PERFECTLY. I don't know how you do it.

I also really really liked that there were two homunculi who were brothers, disguised as Ed and Al. It was very fitting. And I love how you made their bond strong enough that Shawn would try to bring Michael back, but they're completely different people from Ed and Al.

You asked a couple chapters ago whether the plot was too confusing, but it's really not. It was really clear and easy to understand, and the whole ride was very enjoyable. This is definitely going on my faves.

The story was great, and I love the crack pieces at the end, especially the strip poker one!

LMFAO, THIS WAS AWESOME! But its over!! *emocorner* There are no good homunculus!Al fics on here...I need to change that...and Pride!Ed fics rock. There aren't enough of those either...=(

OMG
At that last part, all I could think was...
CULLENXELRIC
*gigglesnort*
"Well, we are two experienced adults. We could always give him The Talk with a small practical demonstration…"
*L. O. L.*
This is like a deleted scenes thing...I like it!

Aw, how sweet! ^^
I still think it's ironic that Michael and Shawn look exactly like Ed and Al with their bodies back...It's kind of sad, even.
O__O Poor Ed! He's gonna die early!
I liked Al's advice...
So...Is this the end?

I have nothing to say save for that this story is awesome, and it deserves more reviews XD

Huh. Nice chapter! Although I slightly doubt that the homunculi would be dumb enough to make the Ed lookalike without automail, or something that looks similar...
Then again, Wrath isn't exactly what I'd call smart...
How fitting it is that the two homunculi, desguised as Ed and Al, are brothers.
I have one request: Make shorter chapters! This could have easily been cut in half. To me, perfect chapter length is 1,500 words, give or take.
Update soon!

Don't do it, Al! lol Pretty good fic so far. Just a note on your A.N., I didn't notice it here but if you think it's rushed/incomplete, don't post it until you're happy with it - the vast majority of us will take quality over quantity, so quick updates aren't that important (heck, I've been known to leave one over a year before XD)

But yeah, pretty good so far, I'm definitely liking it XD

Wow, I don't know what else to say.

-huggles Fake!Al- Aww, I feel so sorry for him! Please let him be okay/not hated... I love Real!Al too, but Fake!Al's really sweet (in his own, demented homunculus kind of way) And Mustang's totally made of win here too, love him XD

Awesome characterisation, well-written, interesting plot... I'd say you have quite the story here, m'dear...

So...Is this the end? It can't be, right?
I have a lump in my throat...That's not good. Not good at all.
I'm hungry.
But that's beside the point.
OH NO.
ED ISN'T FAKE, IS HE?!?!?!? NO!
I never thought that Al could get tired at all...But, I guess, emotionally tired is sort of different, isn't it.

Ah...This is sad. I feel bad for Ed...Where IS Al right now, anyways? Did he get away from Lust, or not? You have to make that clear in the next chapter, okay?