Sorry to hear about the situation. But it happens. The three chapters you do have up are well done and intriguing! Good job with what you have up!

I guess I'm a sucker if it sounds like love. Why do you think this chapter is boring. It's part of developing what looks like a really great plot.

oughm ...until next year? oh, that's bad news. :(

But anyway, i'm surviving! coz breathe is turning out to be a really good fic! Good job!

I'll be waiting until next year :)

Wow, a sequel! So far, I am loving this story, you did a really, really good job!

I hope you can update this soon!

Evil cliffhanger! _ Please right more? Tis good so far.

PLS PLS PLS continue as soon as possible!

just got it into my fav's list! :)

PLEASE! YOU... NEED... TO... CONTINUE...

k...u need to update

Wow, you have to finish this! Soon too...

OOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooh! Write more NOW!

keep going...great story. Hopefully, Obi-wan comes face to face with his parents!

*waves hand in a jedi-like fashion*

write more, you will

or injure you severly with my glowy-blade-thingy, i will

love it, keep writing

update

soon

please!

:):):):):)

or

i

will

hunt

u

down

and

make

u

update

$ $



{_}

wow, this is a great story, i love it. i wonder why obi's parents want him back. please update and soon, please

Why do Obi-Wan's parents want him back?

What position does his parents hold?

WHO ATTACKED HIM AND BANT?

You have to write more...this is to good.