 Dameon 5/28/05 . chapter 4Sorry to hear about the situation. But it happens. The three chapters you do have up are well done and intriguing! Good job with what you have up! |
 Setsuna 12/3/02 . chapter 2 I guess I'm a sucker if it sounds like love. Why do you think this chapter is boring. It's part of developing what looks like a really great plot. |
 Has-Bei too lazy to sign in 11/9/02 . chapter 4 oughm ...until next year? oh, that's bad news. :(
But anyway, i'm surviving! coz breathe is turning out to be a really good fic! Good job!
I'll be waiting until next year :) |
 remnants2011 11/8/02 . chapter 4 Wow, a sequel! So far, I am loving this story, you did a really, really good job!
I hope you can update this soon! |
 crescentgaia 11/6/02 . chapter 3Evil cliffhanger! _ Please right more? Tis good so far. |
 Has-Bei Padolsa 9/9/02 . chapter 2PLS PLS PLS continue as soon as possible!
just got it into my fav's list! :) |
 Has-Bei Padolsa 9/9/02 . chapter 3PLEASE! YOU... NEED... TO... CONTINUE... |
 lighted eagle 9/5/02 . chapter 3 k...u need to update |
 SilverDragon too lazy to sign in 8/24/02 . chapter 3 Wow, you have to finish this! Soon too... |
 Bam-shwick 6/5/02 . chapter 3 OOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooh! Write more NOW! |
 CanIsay 5/31/02 . chapter 3 keep going...great story. Hopefully, Obi-wan comes face to face with his parents! |
 Daarthe Lemelemie 5/30/02 . chapter 3*waves hand in a jedi-like fashion*
write more, you will
or injure you severly with my glowy-blade-thingy, i will |
 natalie 5/28/02 . chapter 1 love it, keep writing
update
soon
please!
:):):):):)
or
i
will
hunt
u
down
and
make
u
update
$ $
{_} |
 b 5/26/02 . chapter 3 wow, this is a great story, i love it. i wonder why obi's parents want him back. please update and soon, please |
 DragonElf-86 4/29/02 . chapter 3Why do Obi-Wan's parents want him back?
What position does his parents hold?
WHO ATTACKED HIM AND BANT?
You have to write more...this is to good. |