 purpleirises 2009-10-29 . chapter 8your story is very touching... thanks for sharing :) |
 Yanaril 2009-10-29 . chapter 8Aw! Thank you for the epilogue and the fic, in general! It's one of ma favourite! |
 Guivre 2009-10-28 . chapter 8I love this story. Great job! |
 I am the Wind Mizuki Cullen 2009-10-26 . chapter 8aw, it was such a good story. im sad that it ended : (
thanks for writeing it though! :D |
 Flames Chaos and Wolf 2009-10-26 . chapter 8Awesome stuff. A good ending to a great story. |
 Nocturngirl 2009-10-26 . chapter 8I loved this story. One of my favorite couples done in an interesting way. I think well of your writing ;> You came up with a good story and plot and kept the characters IC while still giving them new depths.
The only thing was during the modern day Japan episodes it was very confusing to figure out who was who with Keirin's friends. Like, we know the Inuyasha world so if you say "the demon-slayer' or 'the Lord of the Western Lands' etc, we know who you're talking about. But, Rin's friends were just a blur because they weren't as devoloped characters so saying 'the curly haired girl' or sometimes even their names made me stop and re-read to try to figure out who was saying what and why. The only thing I would suggest is to watch that and consider giving your ancillary characters simpler names etc. to make them easier to identify.
Sorry for the Long review. Like I said I really did like the story so I hope this doesn't make you doubt that.
Keep writing. |
 Rickashay 2009-10-26 . chapter 8It's ended :(
Great job! |
 HawkAngel XD 2009-10-26 . chapter 8aw!! incredible work!! fascinating!!
HawkAngel |
 FlareKnight 2009-10-26 . chapter 8Definitely a nice end to the story. Managed to wrap things up regarding the side characters and still offer a positive conclusion to the main pair. Definitely a relationship that people on the outside may not be able to fully understand. Good to see that they will be together no matter what comes.
Nice job with the Jaken replacement. Seems it's his fate to continue like that.
Takuya was definitely right. No way you can mention an engagement meeting and have anything but a negative reaction.
Overall a really nice story and glad I found it. |
 NKHeart 2009-10-21 . chapter 7I dunno if this is complete or not--but it's very enjoyable as is! The characters seem very...in-characterish...Right.
Anyways, I look forward to more, if there is :) |
 FlareKnight 2009-10-20 . chapter 7Well this is definitely an interesting development. It was pretty nice considering how much was in this chapter. Sesshomaru did well though they weren't really very high level opponents. Probably did the right thing in sending her back though think she would have figured out how to handle herself eventually. I mean if Kagome can do it I'm not willing to count out anyone :D.
Probably a good thing the time differential wasn't great since if she was missing for weeks it would have created a massive panic. I wonder though about the last part. The deep voice almost makes me think of some decedent or reincarnation of Sesshomaru. But that would mean the great guy didn't last all that time. Of course the lack of demon's other than that mask one that attacked early in the series would seem to say they are all gone. Either that or they did a good job adjusting to the changing world and slipped nicely into human society.
If that Takuya is a reincarnation it would be somewhat disappointing since I'd feel for Sesshomaru. Especially for Jaken who probably wouldn't get a reincarnation into this situation unless Takuya has some assistant following him around.
Anyways am curious how this will all end. Definitely could be an interesting finish. |
 Yanaril 2009-10-13 . chapter 7Lovely chapter. The end was so touching.
And Sesshomaru's sacrifice was beautiful. |
 Nocturngirl 2009-10-12 . chapter 7That's great. I love how you brought it back with Yuuma's decendant and everything. Is this the last chap or is there more? |
 penny_dreadfully 2009-10-11 . chapter 7 possibly the best inuyasha fic I have read. Well written and you managed to capture a rin/shesh relationship without the creepinrss. Excelent job. |
 Rickashay 2009-10-11 . chapter 7That was a fantastic chapter. Thank you so much. |