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Maria-Lilly Kon
2008-07-10
ch 1,
abuseI haven't reviewed this before, but when I saw 6 reviews I just HAD to review and make the "devil's number" into a lucky 667! I love your writing, pure genius!
sazza-da-vampire
2007-04-21
ch 14,
abuseTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU for not killing Legolas off! i agree with what you said all those years ago, it would have been wrong. well, i think it's obvious i loved it, as i usually only review the last chap that i read,and reviewing a fic from 02 in 07 is a little strange.well,if you get my reviews, congrats!
sazza-da-vampire
2007-04-21
ch 7,
abuseso they've found out about his injury... aren't the other hobbits gonna learn the truth of the original bruising? i still don't know why i am reviewing, seeing as this story was finished more than four (closer to five, actually) years ago. oh well, habit.:)
sazza-da-vampire
2007-04-21
ch 5,
abuseOMG! i just realised that you finished writing this before i turned ten! wow, is there even a point in reviewing? anyway, i can't beleive how many authors delight in putting my favourite character of all time through so much pain. oh, well, i'd probably enjoy cooking up my own share of torment for Legolas too, so i can't complain... that much... luv it, SDV
sazza-da-vampire
2007-04-21
ch 3,
abuseyou're right, Galadriel did give Legolas a bow (in the book and i think the extended editions of the movie)when Frodo received the Light, Boromir the belt, Gimli the lock of hair, and i can't recall the other gifts at present. sorry if you've already been told, but i generally don't look at reviews others have sent when i read a fic. i'm still reading, up to as far as you've written! luv, SDV
LupinandHarry
2006-09-04
ch 14,
abuseits beena while no? Well anyways, even though its been years, I just recently read your story, and I really liked it. It would have been very wrong to kill Legolas!! Hes too hot to die. I know you wanted some constructive critisim, so here it is, The whole part where Legolas kills Richastas, that was a tad but corny im afraid, so next time, try to cut down on the corniness. I loved the story though! YAY LEGGY!
na
2004-08-15
ch 8, anon.
abuseI realy love your story.
NycteaScandiaca
2004-06-14
ch 14,
abuse*just sits and stares at her computer for a while*

Wow, that was good... Although my personal favorite LotR character is Aragorn, I really liked this story. Your writing is simply superb. You had me hooked from the first chapter, heck, I even missed the Mummy, which is now on TV, simply because I couldn't stop reading.

The details of your story are great, as are your battle scenes. You write them in a way that I can practically see the fights in my head. And that's impressive, I tell you...

Keep up the good work, and I'll be reading your other LotR stories soon too :)
Link
2004-06-03
ch 4, anon.
abuseYour'e evil. Oh sorry, i'll try to make it sound more dramatic. Your'e very, very EVIL! * Cackled laugh*
Kelsey
2004-06-02
ch 14, anon.
abuse*applauds* This is the third time I've read this. I LOVE it! you are so good! I've read all of your LOTR fics. this is the best!!

In Richasta's cave, I got shivers. I felt cold whenever you spoke of that overwhelming cold...

and when Legolas regained his elven spark I was suddenly warm.

the details are so precice that I can actually see it all.

you are so good. I was so into this fic. Wonderful. you have such talent.
eadramaqueen
2004-04-11
ch 8, anon.
abuseWow!! i cannot believe you are only 15 years old!! By the way you write, I thought you were at least 20. You write really good and your stories are interesting. I love this one!! I love when things happen to Legolas(sadistic, I know) because he's my fave character. Keep up the good work, gurl!!
Kitsune Kida
2004-04-01
ch 14,
abuseGreat story. i loved it. you have done a great job. Good work and i think you should keep writing LOTRs stories if you have the inspiration to write another on. Se Ya!!
sab
2004-03-09
ch 14, anon.
abusereally great!
Kelsey
2004-02-14
ch 14, anon.
abuse*gives standing ovation(sp)*
That was absolutely without a doubt the best Action fic I have ever read! I sat here in front of the computer for almost 5 hours reading this. I got chills when Legolas was feeling the coldness.
I absolutely must praise you. This was so good, and you wonder why everyone loves this so much.
I'm glad Legolas was the one to kill Richastas. After all he's been through, he deserved it! But, at least he got his near death scene. He was the only character that didn't get one in the movie.
you must write a sequel! you just have to!
Tears of Eternal Darkness
2004-01-21
ch 14,
abuseok read all of it but i think u may have over done it a little on the 'Elf-Harming' part but it was good, i liked it >^-^
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