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Hotaru-Naichingeru 8/13/11 . chapter 1
I love how you did it! I sometimes think that myself, a 5'3" and around 110, but then I remember around half of that is muscle and the other half is needed weight. I love the inspiring read!

-Naichingeru
Irrequiem 7/2/09 . chapter 1
Love it! It really makes you think about all of those self-conscious girls out there... :P
Diva 10/14/05 . chapter 1
Not bad. I like Violet best out of Misty's sisters. I'd never think she'd do this to herself, I think she's too smart. I mean, she's a practical genious to Lily! I like all of the Sensational Sisters, but I think Violet is smarter then the rest of them and she plays dumb most of the time.
neogirl7900 7/20/05 . chapter 1
Violet can die of starvation for all I care. *shrug*

But, yeah. This is a good story. You really should up the rating.

I think I woulda liked this more if Violet wasn't so stu- I mean, "intellectually challenged".

Keep it up!

-Neo
Sait 8/2/03 . chapter 1
Midako: This was a really touching story... I think it kind of relates to myself, in a way. I'm not anorexic (that I know of), but pretty much everyone who sees me thinks I am. I'm skinny, which is reason enough for them to think I'm sick.

Midako's little brother: Yeah... there isn't a family history of anorecia, so theres really no reason that she should be. But, sis, you ARE skinny...

M: *glare*

MLB: Okay, okay... I'm going to clean my room now... O_o;

M: So, I'm a little underweight. So what? Eh, anyway, nice story. I love insightful Pokêmon things, seeing as there aren't many out there.

Midako-chan
Alex Warlorn 10/22/02 . chapter 1
It's sad, in this culture we have people who care nothing for themselves that are blobs, and then there are those who over care themselves and become skeletons.

Balanc is it truly impossible to find?

You know, you COULD submit this as an orginal story to a publisher if you just changed the names .. ..
Sharyn 4/23/02 . chapter 1
I haven't read a Pokemon-fic that has dealt so well with issues in real life before. Well done on this. -Sharyn
Brian-lover Alex 3/30/02 . chapter 1
Beautiful and lyrical! I love how you bring the world of Pokemon to vivid and startling life.
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