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Mitchie3.0
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
Okay, I just wan to tell you, even though this color combination goes well on blondes, it looks horrible on me. Soem people with red hair and blue eyes can pull off yellow. I can not. Oh, well, I like you stories, this is the third I've read today! :D
DeidaraIsGod2009
2009-11-04 . chapter 1
Really creepy. I liked it!
Mistress of the Sandbox
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
Awesome oneshot. I don't see those two together often but when I do it's always great!
cake.bot
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
There definitely does need to be more Hidan and Ino fics! Magnificent contribution to an otherwise nonexistent pairing! XD It was not disturbing in the least (in my opinion, lol)--it was just very...Hidan, who IS one creepy bastard indeed. Love it. Great job making this pair work without making it romantic and shippy--it was a good balance of tension and humor, which you handle flawlessly.

-cake.bot
Hitokiri Onib
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
Stopped breathing there for a bit. This was utterly beautiful. In character. Also one serious mind-fark.

I like it.

Ja Ne
^_^
FE Frog
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
and so this is your more serious writing, eh? Nice! I love how decriptive it was and such. God, I wish I could actually write that well. Well, I also kind of saw this as slight romance, and now you're getting me into actually liking this pairing!
een nihc
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
As usual, your Hidan rocks. The way he tries to match the flowers with Ino with what he had in mind is totally morbid.But again, your story rocks.
gemma
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
kudos firefly - never considered an ino and hidan before; thought this was totally fresh and original. great job.
The Elven-Spear
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
That is.. mildly disturbing.
tsukuYomi
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
This fic rocked! XD Awesome job, firefly-sama!
machang
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
Wow creepy, but fantastic! ...as always ;)
missionada
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
This is relatively light for serious Hidanfic, but definitely without losing the creepy factor. His determination to fulfill the desire for sacrifice without actually drawing blood is genuinely disturbing; at times it felt like he would really go through with it. He at least would have if possible, but his realization in the last few paragraphs seems to change that.
Ino is, in contrast, "pretty, perfect, oblivious" till the end, when the perturbation kicks in. Her father's own unknowing comments make it all the more real and sickening.
Brilliant!
Someday-Known
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
This story is amazing! I'm not into pairings that aren't hinted at in the manga but this story is so cool. Great Job!
jolteonforever
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
That was one cool story!
Hidan's like obsession and it all boils down in the end, to this :)
Airyballoon
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
Aw..this is so cute!
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