HA. I have a feeling that the ONE thing Trowa lied about was being on bottom. I mean, if Quatre REALLY said 'ok then Trowa, i want to be on top' i think Trowa would have blinked a few times and told him...'ok, sorry i was lying about that...:D' HA!
But on the other hand...after reading that...HOT and uncomfortable sentence about what Trowa prefered...i can see him as a bottom...just--not to ANY of the other pilots. If anything, if Zechs and Trowa had a less HOSTILE relationship (lol, like when they met in epi 16) then Zechs would most likely top Trowa. Lol, i can barely even see TREIZE topping Trowa. xD Natural born Seme.

O_O OH HOLY WOW, i thought Quat was gonna pick bottom! ... ... O_O!...*scarfs down popcorn and watches* lol

x_x well that was exhausting...@_@...it was like a guide to how to have male sex...only a lot less guide like and a lot more SEX like xD! and i just kept reading it so i didn't really pause to like write. but i do know it was really...@_@ descriptive. I mean first of all, you put Trowa on bottom. lol, which is strange because he still like he was seme since Quat had NO idea how to have sex with a guy...but it was a nice change of of pace. I've never really written Quatre as a top unless he was his alter (lol no steally steally) But uh wow...Trowa's words were like...x_x man~ hahah! i don't even wanna say it...but it was rather thought out and well written by you for the most part. ur a girl right? well reading it...i MAYBE would have assumed so but ONLY because of one part that u wrote that as a guy, i kinda didn't think was true.

There was a bit of too much talking. that certainly threw me off @_@ i think it would have been shorter tho had that happened. overall tho i must say i enjoyed myself and the cold shower i officially need to take...
~PAPER

Lol...XD HA, ACTUALLY! i thought about Quatre's wardrobe as I was reading what he planned on wearing to the club. I'm not sure if Quat owns any clothes that aren't dressy (lol, i mean a part of me does and a BIG part of me doesn't) ha...so it's funny watching him get dressed for a place that like...is FAR from the dressy way he wears clothes. Relena, too ;p

I didn't get the "Mc Duff" joke...idk why the hell i laughed...

Ah hell...so i'm reading about Quatre and his LIQUOR intake and a big part of me is like man, Trowa is sure gonna show up. AND BAM...Trowa. -_- *reads but is NOT looking forward to Quatre's mild drunkness*

Aw, Trowa is with someone else? and it's a girl? ...that's hawt. xD lol ok, jk...for the sake of this story...but it's still hot. lol

Ugh, thank GOD for Relena and her sense and trained eyes and what not. ahh...she so hella osm. haha, Quatre is so irrational tho. asking if Trowa prefers girls. XD why the hell would he give him his number then...wow, this is too juicy, i gotta find out sum more.
o_o OH...oh gawd, awkward...that was his sister...*vomits a little, feels like a retard* xD

Lol, once Relena was whispering to Quatre about being careful with Trowa and Trowa said not to worry, i though Relena was going to smile...and then pull out her 6 inch pocket knife and mouth silently to Trowa 'i'll cut you man! i swear i will if u hurt quatre!' But then again i also thought that once Quatre and Trowa went outside, they were going to have sex.

Wow, Trowa is...bold. But then again i don't blame him; i would have asked Quatre the same questions since he didn't feel sparks with girls supposedly. Now i'm curious if A) he's had sex and 2) what the rest of his answers are...actually, he did do it with Relena didn't he?

NON-Alcoholic, plz. -LOL! That's what he gets for trying to drown his boo hoos. lolsehs
Wow, ever since Trowa sat down to continue speaking to Quatre, i started to feel like Quatre. I started hesitating to read because i got this nervous knot in my stomach and then i started to laugh cuz 1) it's a story and B) It wasn't as if Trowa were going to rape Quat...o_o oh GOD, is he?? *reads more* xD
-_- as a man, Trowa is making me uncomfortable...with all his SCARY ** questions of bluntness...but just to let you know, hand jobs from ANYone is not as great...it's just not. ;p BJ's ARE tho!! xD idk who is better girls or boys

Wow...that was...wow. The writing was pretty intimate. I think i would have loved to see more but i loved what i saw anyway. So i really have nothing to complain about. it was kinda hot. but i think i was uncomfortable BECAUSE it was so interesting and hot. ha ha ha

oh wow, Quatre is short. haha. ok, anyway...lol. I think what first intrigued me about this was Quatre...straight? HA! that made me smile.

How many girls is he going to the club with? dear geezus. o_o
It's weird, I couldn't see Quatre in a bar type scene until i continued reading. but honestly, i think it's because of how u wrote it...not because it would actually happen. xD a part of me feels like he'd be afraid. LOL
And as a side note, i'm glad you chose Relena, not Dorothy. >_> YECK! ...lol

Oh wow, that's new. Quatre and Relena bff? wow...i might enjoy...wow O_O xD i like new things...that don't scare me. har har.
HA! Quatre on a date with some gay hot stranger. I ROLL LAUGHING ON GROUND. HA!

Relena might be the ONLY GW character that i can't picture in anything other than a dress. so this whole time while i'm reading i'm like...the ** did she wear? xD

Good, i'm the only one that thinks Noin's hairstyle justifys her to be a lesbian >_>...i mean, i'm laughing only on the inside...
OH GOD, soon as i read Quatre trading numbers with Dorothy i screamed, DON"T DO IT MAN! xD

@_@ i got the feeling for a second there when Quatre and Relena were talking about Quat not having interest in ANY of the girls, I thought Relena was Heero...and then a small part of me said yeah...if u watch the later episodes she is the nicer version of him >_>...XD HA!

did...Quatre just accept to go again? DX IS HE NOT LEARNING ANYTHING!? lol
LMFAOROTFWCMATHYHC (laughing my ** off rolling on the floor while chocking mildly at this hilarium you have created)I adored Relena's reaction to when Quatre said 'i think i'm gay'...you know, after the staring, drooling and jizzing in pants part. AND THEN!! The denial! XXDD the denial was SO hideous as if Relena was NOT GOING TO CATCH that he said HE was gay! *hold on my jaw just popped badly from smiling*

"It isn't a sin to appreciate a lovely body, regardless of the sex." - I think the way Quatre was doing it...yeah...yes it was! HA!
Wow, I never hated Relena (except in the first 3 episodes...WOOF >__>...<_<...*pets*

WHAT YOU WROTE: "...slender finger found its way under his chin and tilted his face up to meet with the steady gaze of two emerald green eyes from underneath a cinnamon bang of hair. "I'll teach you."

WHAT HAPPENED TO ME:
I forgot where i was, i jizzed a little, i think my boxer/briefs exploded, i jizzed a little, couldn't figure out what day it was, jizzed a little, my elbow gave out and i hit my head on the table...which caused me to jizz a little...forgot my name, jizzed a bit, forgot YOUR name, jizzed completely-passed out and then had a sandwich...
I think me simply telling u this means i owe u dinner.

SO OVERALL:

Honestly, I don't think it was the story, i think it was you. I think you're one of those writers who can be given any pairing, any topic and any genre and write something ANYBODY would want to read. Thank GOD i found u. lol. The flow of your writing isn't repetive, grammatically incorrect or nuffin. you did all writing parts amazing and character...hmm...character...again, i KNOW it wasn't OOC but it wasn't exact IC either. it was more, ICS (in character situation) Where the character only flowed given you put them in a situation we have never seen before (like the episodes duh lol) and you drew it COMPLETELY from your imagination in how they would act in this given world. @_@ WHOO AU writers scare me with what they can do when they're really good. You're p good...and i would read more but its...04:38 right now @_@ BED. lol So yu did wonderfully amazing and i'll be back for the next chapter

~PAPER!

This is a beautiful story. I have always liked Quatre and Trowa together, and you write them very well. Cinnamon.

~"Are you enjoying this?" Trowa asked softly.

Quatre could only moan.

"Would you like me to stop?"

A growl.

Trowa chuckled to himself and worked his way back along Quatre's neck and jaw until he located those sweet lips and proceeded to kiss Quatre senseless.~
Loved that little interraction :) Cinnamon.

I have to say, this story was masterfully written. You are a truly talented writer!

This is a great concept and I like this so far. Looking forward to reading the next chapter after I finish this. The dialogue is quite repetitive thought, but you were probably putting emphasis on Quatre's inner turmoil correct?

Aw, that was such a sweet ending~ So cute. . .
Great, great fic! *applauds*

Such a wonderful ending ! Sexy but sweet ! (the lemon was really well written, with a lot of details but without being gross. Just really hot !)
Thank you so much for this really good story !

O~ We're building up to the big event!
Quatre's cute, and Trowa's. . . .Trowa. He's awesome~ So caring. . .
Please update soon~! ^^-

I really liked this first chapter ! Especially sexy beast Trowa !
The way you described the atmosphere in the nightclub was also pretty good, as well as the feelings and thoughts of Quatre.
Hope you will update soon !

Solveig

Cool. I love Trow/Quat fics and this is shaping up to be pretty good. I'd like to see more, please.

Haha! Nice. He needs to find out if he's gay, so he calls Relena.
A chick.

Ah, I like this one as much as it's companion fic~ Though here you also get a feel for the developing relationships, and that's nice~
Please update soon! :3