omg!..lol! it was funny as hell! omg the spanish part! Pepe! what a great name..i haven't heard it though..it's a nickname not a name but it was good! and your spanish is beyond good..it was perfect..just like i would say it if i had a pc problem..lol..loved it! i mean it..

Loved this chapter...hilarious, smoky...great!

I never knew that DnD could be so sexy! Great chapter!

Oh my goodness. I will never look at Dungeons and Dragons the same way ever again. (That's a compliment.)

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia

CH 3 was my favorite! More lemony goodness please :)

Wow... I will never look at DnD the same way ever again... Or the people who play it lol

And nice to see he gives the same advice as my geek: "Opening Firebox – because Edward had instructed me to never trust Microsoft’s software unless it was absolutely necessary,"

excellent new rules for d&d

Oh a little caveman from the geek. Nice.

Loved the pebcak error reference. I get I D 10 T ones at work all the time

Loved it. Loved it. Loved it.

I am in love with this geeky yet uber sexy confidant Edward - anybody wanna get me one for Christmas, I would be forever indebted - please :-)

Who knew D&D could be so hot. Loved it!

Ok, I'm officially in love, deep love with this story.

After I change my panties, I'm going out to the patio to "smoke a cigarette" and have a shot of whiskey on the rocks.

Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us. Let me know what I can do to help you keep up the good work. ;)

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Was awesome. NO condom though? lol And when did this take place? :P

Hell that was hot! I wish this was the original, but now that I think about it... it seems almost too hot for Edward, and I don't think he'd be like that...all caveman, animal-like :)

But nevertheless, it was amazing and I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing this!