You are doing such a great job with this, and I will be very interested to see whom you have decided with the pairings. I vote Komamura and Tenma and then Hitsugaya and Tenma.

Her pact with Toorima is an interesting one, and her temporary loss a sad one. Though it seems that the loss is not permanent. Your flow with the story is well done as well as the story itself. Very appealing.

Great job and thanks for all your hard work and talent! I always look forward to your updates. :)

Very interesting and cool!! I have never watched "Bleach", but I liked this lots!! ^__^

I loved this first chapter, and i especially love Komamura. He never gets enough love. I hope that he will be with Shikon as they seem very well suited for each other. I hope that you update soon and not leave people hanging!

Great job and thanks for all your hard work and talent!

this would be one of your most enticing and graphic yet the characters were beautiful and if you make another please let me know, though I'm not much one for reading this yours do captivate me.