Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Apple Sauce
Aubuyn
2009-10-02 . chapter 2
These drabbles are flawless. In so few words you manage to write one sentence masterpieces, and I absolutely adore how clearly you actually understand these characters. Mucking around searching for fanfiction here, I started to lower my standards -- if only because the fics were just THAT bad and I was just THAT desperate -- and then I come across this BEAUTY, and oh my god, may I subscribe to your newsletter?

I disagree with the previous reviews; yes, your drabbles are vague, but that's what makes them even more lovely -- with the way you write, these scenes don't need to be black and white. They're perfect the way they are.

I wish I could just quote every drabble back at you, they were that good, but obviously that would be a waste of time. But the ones I keep going back to reread? Vision, Poniard, Prance, and Princess! Ah, they were so ridiculously good! And I'm actually starting to feel a little silly for writing a review that's probably three times as long as Special Delivery, haha. I really hope that you are inspired to write more drabbles at three in the morning, because I’ll be waiting to read more from you! Thank you so much!
Ma Jr.
2009-08-22 . chapter 2
Yinsai Nook Sundry,

Another good drabble, so when are you going to write a Jeri/Impmon story? Because personally I think your quite good with these two.

Morwen,
Ma Junior
yatsirch
2009-08-15 . chapter 2
Not going to lie, I had the biggest stupidest grin on my face while reading this and I may have squealed once. Or twice XD

DAMMIT. These two have to stop being so cute or I'm going to permanently lapse into incomprehensible fangirling. You seriously captured everything that I love about these two <3

Ooh, although I do think it should be 'sitting' instead of 'sat' in 15.
Geekgirl
2009-07-31 . chapter 2
Better than the last chapter, but it be nice to see one of these prompts turned into a short story.
Geekgirl
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
Clarify somewhat please. Too vague.
Yami Solar
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
That was REALLY confusing and so please add more detail and make it simpler!
Rainbow35
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
That was vague and confusing, no offence... Maybe you could explain what happens more?
Return to Top