Very nice introduction. It's 5:25 so play the 25 Minutes song. That bit was funny.

Now the conflict you made was so-so. Everyone was missing, Zick comes running to the church...to find Elena's getting married?! AND...to BOMBOLO?! Like, "Are you serious?!" Was I thankful to find out it was a dream! Excellent little plot twist. (Really.)

I found the ending cute. It was pretty vague, though. Did you mean Elena just get a new Bombo to take care of? Or was Bombolo the real-life groom Zick had dreamt of?

It was a fun read, overall. Cute story! :)