Right, you totally have to continue this. Your blurb of a summary is so attention grabbing and nothing is explained in this story/chapter and I want it to be! Though I find it odd that Sam would spend an entire 86 years crying, but I guess if he's a mech now that would make sense.

Whydo you write such amazing Transformers fics? you keep me from doing important things, like sleeping. haha :D
Oh please please please! continue this story! I can't wait to see how this turns out!
And if you don't mind. I'm gonna watch you on dA too.

you should continue!

please update soon!

This is amazing! Please continue. You've blended the two ideas in such an interesting way, I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Updte!

I vote All-mother and Pet!

Whoa...I totally got sucked into this! Continue please!!~

Please continue this. This sorta of idea I haven't come across so im very much interested in reading more from the this story. Update soon please =]

i love this story, its a refreshing view and not one of the overdone stories that everyone makes. i would love to see it continued to the end and ill wait patiently for your update.
i cant give you any positive critisism since i cant fint anything to critisise upon :D

/cookies from Kiota-chan

This is completely different. I would like to see how this went. So please continue.

Yes, please continue! :)

Plz! continue, continue! CONTINUE!
why? becuase it sounds cute, and sad, and damit! what happened to Mikaela and Sam?!
but I wonder, with ROTF out, how does you can joing both concepts?
..AND I really have to go sto school... but consider the posibility of a second chapter!

Oh my gosh, I cried. Such a good beginning. I really want to see more of this story. Thanks for taking the time to write for us readers.

Wow! A briliant beginning to the story! Love it! I love the relationship between "the carrier" (sam) and Bumblebee! ITs really interesting to see how you've created and evolved what cybertron may be like after the war and I think its interesting to find that organics are a rarity! Really looking forward to finding out sam's past, and I hope you'll continue the story in the present time too, as I like how the sparklings are reacting the "the carrier" and I wanna know the sparklings opinion on sam's past when they find out!
Overall though, a very promising first chapter, and I am very eager to see where you take this story!
Thankyou!
:) x