I prefer this fic over some other one-shots i have read so far. There are other stories with this simlar theme but your writing style makes this so much sweeter in terms of personality. It's not sappy and has no major smut in it but for some reason it seems unfinished.
I love the way you portrayed Zero though considering most of the time, in other fics, he is always reluctant and is angry but this was the need to satisfy with the hint of shonen-ai Well done
~read ya later

wow, zero seems a bit.. cruel? it was a nice, short piece nonetheless. good job! ^^

Zero is SUCH a tease!

-All Tears Must Fall

Lovely fic! :D

Zero wanting to get a reaction from Kaname is a theme that others have used too, but your style and the way you presented it made it different enough to be new and refreshing, and it was very enjoyable. :D I'd happily read more from you~!
By far, not enough people write Zero as the more aggressive one, despite the fact it's all there in the manga when it comes to his feelings towards vampires and all, especially purebloods. XD

The characterizations were perfect, and the descriptions of Kaname's reactions etc. were delightful! :D If you hadn't mentioned it was your first VK fic, we'd never have known, your grasp of it is great~! :D

That was beautiful! Especially the characterization. There's definitely other fics with the same scenario as this but your writing style makes it especially interesting. <3 Do write more.

that was so hot, it made my eyes burn.
i liked it a lot. ^^

That was okay. I think I read a fic like this but I think it had a plot or I think theres another like this but longer and with sex though.