   emmett23meg 4/28/12 . chapter 29I loved this story, its been good reading it... |
| emmett23meg 4/25/12 . chapter 10 Ewww Edward is a pricked right now... I don't blame bella.. |
| folm 4/15/12 . chapter 29 Loved this outtake! Best description of labor & delivery! Brought back great memories, believe it or not. Once I got those epidurals, I was really able to relax, and even appreciate all the jokes my husband and the nurse were making. And there is nothing like meeting your baby for the first time- you captured that perfectly!
Thanks fro a great story! |
| folm 4/15/12 . chapter 27 Great ending! Thanks for such a great story! |
| folm 4/15/12 . chapter 26 Great chapter! I love a HEA :) |
| folm 4/15/12 . chapter 25 Wow, that was some excellent writing! Romantic and sexy all at once! |
| folm 4/13/12 . chapter 23 I didn't realize Jasper was such a dirty man! Such language! I thought he was more sensitive than this ;) |
| folm 4/13/12 . chapter 22 That happy ending left me with a smile on my face. Seriously i am grinning like an idiot. I love how they are progressing in this chapter and the last, not overtalking everything and being all angsty... just enjoying each other! And like I said, that ending was perfect, tonight was not the night to give up the vcard. Not yet :) |
| folm 4/13/12 . chapter 21 Wow! That was a long, and satisfying chapter. Edward is not so dumb after all! I liked his POV, cause when I was reading Bella's POV, I was wondering what he was thinking, so Thanks!
Great, great chapter! |
| folm 4/13/12 . chapter 19 That was epic! Edward is an idiot...he really is clueless! Love it! |
| folm 4/12/12 . chapter 15 Love Edward's pov ...I understand what he was thinking trying to kiss bella, he didn't mean it as a pity kit. Stop while ahead! Litlle confused why James is masen when he married n to family. Wouldn't he have different names than masen or cullen.. not big deal! |
| folm 4/12/12 . chapter 14 S ... Wow! That was just awesome all around. Your writing is so quickpaced and seamless during their contest, then I could feel the tension and embarrassment! Great chapter! |
| folm 4/12/12 . chapter 13 I love Bella...she is hilarious! I'm even starting to warm up to Edward sullen;) their banter was fun to read, and Great ending, can't wait to see the fallout |
| folm 4/11/12 . chapter 8 Oh, Bella! Green eyes finished you off? I hope he wards some nice jeans an tshirts when hes in town! There were some great movies in there. |
| folm 4/11/12 . chapter 7 Loved Emmet! Sweetcakes! That is the best. Edward is a little full of himself, just wait till he sees the charms if small town life;)
Great writing, very funny too! |
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