I don't mean to be mean but your writing needs a little work. Honestly, I couldn't figure out what you're trying to say in your story. It's good but needs work.

Okay,you wanted a constructive critique, here goes... The format needs work. It is far too confusing and I honestly had trouble trying to figure out which characters were speaking when and following the overall storyline. And the spelling and grammar errors were distracting. I would seriously consider revamping your main character some. The name is too long and overdone, the princess-sick-of-her-life thing has been done to death, and adding new members to Team Lightyear has been done to death as well. Her attitude and personality are a bit too abrasive and unreadable. Make her completely Catorcean and describe only that alien race. Introducing new races and then combining them with other more well known aliens is confusing. Also, do some rewriting on the BLoSC characters, they were a bit unrecognizible. Mira is not ashamed or embarrassed of being a princess, she just doesn't want her royal status being the only thing that defines her. And fix XR. He is sexist and at times obnoxious, but I think it is a bit overdone in this story. I would do another round of rewiting and possibly get a beta reader to help with any problems.

Do you know there is another Starlit in the Buzz Lightyear section? Also the name is a little too much. And the princess thing is over done with Mira. Then the format needs major work, as well as the spelling. I say you get a beta reader. And the format is too hard to read.

I just did not enjoy this at all. The girl's name (Starlit Galaxyshimmer Moonbrite) is just waaaayyyyy too cheesy sounding. And what is the deal with people constantly adding people to Buzz's team? The story didn't make too much sense in places and seemed very jumbled. The character herself didn't make much sense (part human/ part tangean, etc.) I highly doubt Mira's people would mix with a species they consider to be apes. Instead of mixing species, be a little be more creative and make up a whole new alien race. Poor XR! He's girl-crazy, but you have him acting like some lecher drooling in some woman's cleavage. I did like seeing Booster used more though.

Alright, I don't mean to nitpick, but hmmm, Starlit? What creative naming. It sounds an awful lot like "Starlite", doesn't it? Now, I clearly state in my disclaimers that that name belongs to me. You only dropped one letter. And on occassions you added the "e" at the end. I think people will agree with me when I say RIP OFF. Have a nice day.