hey enjoying the story. hopefully sarah pulls through this then billy's stubborn behind can come to his senses and realize that he could've exiled his grandbaby...when(i hope my assumption is close)she was internally fighting the battle of her life to stay alive and become the ultimate female wolf she was destined to be...ops!didn't mean to get carried away...lol
oh, for a minute there i thought jake was going to lose it and turn wolf again to kick edward's butt out of his house...that would've been AWESOME!so, when is the next update??*hint hint*lol

When I first started reading this I was quite apprensive. I have always been an Edward/Bella girl. I won't say that you have changed me but this is really really good. I am loving the way you are portraying the characters and showing how it would be. I am now waiting anxiously for your next update...
luv Arianna

:O...poor sarah...I hope she makes it through this...can't wait for more!! hope you feel better :)

Love It.. Hope The Wolf Genes Win Over The Vamps Genes

loved it!!

great chapter! loved it! update soon! i hope sarah lives!

Oh I hope she just turns "human" again, or at least a wolf, so she could be with Seth!
Urgh, Edward, I can't even think of him normally anymore.
Keep up the good work, this story is wonderful.

Please, continue!

IS she going to be some wolf/vampire hybrid? That would be cool.
Update soon.

aw! i'm sick right now and really need a good cry... thanks that was really touching and i so appreciate what you are writing! i see a bright future for this story! ;P

Excellent!!

it is very refreshing to see Bella show some healthy anger towards Edward and Alice,
Alice is definitely not blameless, she was more concerned for her brother than about Bella or her daughter,what could have happened to them at the volturri.


TEAM JACOB ALL THE WAY!
JACOB/BELLA FOREVER!

Nice chapter! Wow hope she is ok! Then they need to kick Edwards *!

Poor Edward! Poor Sarah!

AHH!

I think I know what might happen, but for now, I shall keep my mouth shut!

Great work!

Please update soon!

!x~Frankie~x!