Neat--I'm sorry that I didn't come across this until you posted the last chapter. Great tale, and I love the back and forth along the tale's timeline, as well as the twist at the end. Now I'm off to see if you wrote any more goodies...

wow. amazing story, and very good use of the unreliable narrator technique. i loved this. very well done :]

Good one. I know this chapter is the epilogue, so unless you are willing to complete this (Dunno how) i suppose you shoukd mark this as Completed

Good work here, very few spelling/grammar errors. I enjoyed it to say the least. Although I do find your Lone Wanderer to be quite hypocritical; which annoyed me in the end, especially because it's written in the Lone Wanderer's POV.

Of course, that's not a real flaw in the writing — just my own preference. Keep writing!

This has got to be, one of the BEST fanfictions, I have EVER read. You told the story in such a fluid and realistic manner. And you made the justice of it all completely believable. I, for one, applaud you and your story.

Wow, that is the only word that can enjoy the pleasure it was to read this review. Every "chapter" was well written and engaging and I do believe I did not spot a single mistake in the writing. This is probably one of the most fun things I've read on this site in a long time, I cannot await for it's conclusion.

I didn't expect to see Paradise Falls get destroyed XD I really like it, can't wait for the last chapter

O.O You killed off Dave and DESTROYED the Republic of Dave! Man, that's cruel...

That was wicked Dave.

Perfect, awesome, great story telling.

Please continue, I love a great retelling.

Wow, this was really amazing. I was confused at first when you skipped straight to the underworld in that six month time skip, but then I saw your reason for doing so.

I love your portrayal of 'The Lone Wanderer'; he acts just the way you'd expect someone to act having done what he's done to survive. I also enjoy the passion you put into his words, like when he's talking to Mr. Crowley.

//“Each key represents a period of my new life. I was raised in Vault 101 to be a model member of society. It’s different on the wastes. So now, before I give you these keys, I am going to tell you what I had to do to get them.” Crowley didn’t say anything. He just sat and listened.//

Best ending, ever. That was a seriously supremely awesome way of ending the chapter while setting up for the next one. I think the way you're telling the story is great; from my understanding it's going to be 'The lone Wanderer' telling Mr. Crowley how he obtained each key; it's great that you were clear on that.

I know it's just the first chapter, but I like the Lone Wanderer already; actually, I really like him, which is rare for me to like an OC so early(I don't know, is he technically an OC?).

And, I also appreciate that you're using Dogmeat.

I wish I could leave a longer review, but it's a short chapter and only the beginning. I do hope you continue and I look forward to reading and reviewing each new chapter.

Great job!

Happy Writing!

~Scarlet~

I really enjoyed the first chapter :D Not only was it very well-written, but it was interesting as well.

I like your perception of the Lone Wanderer.