even though your story was very well written, easy to follow and had a good plot line, it still felt like Lucy stole the show.

Aw, lovely ending. One question still needs to be answered though: how did Lucy know how to do all that stuff?

Yeah, I BETA'd this so you know what I think anyway, but... I love this story because of its fast-paced, TV style action, completely believable dialogue and wonderful characterisation. You dragged me along. Lucy is a wonderful character, but you made characters from the fandom do their work too - and I really got into it even though I've never seen The Unit, which is great. Nice work, thanks for letting me BETA! xx

cute story ... I love Bob.

Love it! Really great plot, the action is fab! Please write more soon!