Finally! After a month of searching, I have found your story again. Yay! As I happy as I am though, I am unhappy to find that your cliffies are as evil as ever. I've been thinking on whom has the Triforce of Power a long time now, without coming to a conclusion obviously.

I like how you incorporated the Ocarina of Time. I've found myself playing TP more than once screaming at the game for not working right... Then I would realise I'm playing TP not OoT... "Oh, that's why Midna popped up, instead of the ocarina... Hehe..."

I like the glasses too. Those would make my life great, along with every other man on the planet. Same thing with the teleporting bracelet. No more walking to the kitchen! XD

I can't wait until your next update!

The Sage of Water,
ConGie

now I liked this chapter a lot
the vault scene could have been rather gimmicky, but you kept it "zeldary", and believable.

It was fun seeing all the items, and I wonder if any more will some to light in the war, and if any will be used in your action scenes

Jaron out

lol, I'm not sure about men, but I love explody thingies! As great a chapter as always, filled with characterisation, interesting and original plot development, a sprinkling of humour where approiate, and, you gave a whole new perspective on Ganondorf! The only possible thing I could comment on was the occasional spelling/punctuation/grammar mistakes (all minor, such as words in the wrong place etc and very few. Were you rushing by any chance? ;)) I eagerly await your next update, Darren Shan! (I choose Shan on account of the fact that he's the only other author I know to ever make me picture a man inside out...*shivers*).
Ano

Good job transitioning from the Dark God's intentions to his excuses.

I was happy to see the paragraphs of introspection on Lynaka's part, as well. They flowed nicely and I could not tell they had been added later.

Ooh man I want to know the Dark God is, your killing me! Tell us already! You really know how to hook an audience, lucky b-tard. I hope you will be able post the next chapter relativly soon and wish you the best of luck with your story.
6tail

Good exposition is good.

We need it if the next few chapters are going to be splitting up and kicking butt.

Daskin's dialogue is funny as always. Oh, Daskin. You and those exploding shoes. XD

Ganondorf's texts... I have a feeling what's on them is going to be wildly more important as time goes on...

“It would be rather careless of me to just go blasting holes wherever I thought the tunnel inside would be, now wouldn’t it?”

Obviously, Majacen shows more control over his desire to blast things wide open than, say, the mage whom some call...Tim.

Would the world that was devastated by the war among the gods be ours? Kind of like Warhammer 40,0 but with a more positive ending.

I finally found time to read this and I am not disappointed, but as usual, your stories make me want more

I wonder who they are referring to as the new power bearer.

Still, thanks for the updates,

Jaron out

I must apologize for not reviewing before; college, working full-time, and a family leaves precious little time for reviewing these days. *sigh* But I try and do what I can.

I am enjoying this work immensely, the quality being just as good as "Fourth Piece", and with clever new twists and surprises as well (Viserys' daughter, and Daskin's reaction to her being one of them - very cool, and unexpected). I have to admit I am extremely intrigued as to whether or not the dark god is the Fierce Deity, or a new character, as well as exactly who is the new bearer of power (I have a strong suspicion on the latter). Again, great work so far! Unfortunately, I have to cut this short, but I'll review again as soon as I'm able.
*Gives a flyby salute in the Cygnus Spaceworks XM-1 Missileboat (pictured as my avatar, btw.)*

Yikes! This took a long time to get around to reading. :-/

I'm trying to picture the revamped Daskin with runes now. Hm, interesting... he's sure not ever going to be able to hide ever again...

It was nice to see Arnak again. I always like him.

I know that this chapter was a lot of exposition, but hey: whatever. All it means is that next chapter you don't have to set things up so much... though I do agree with Seldavia about being careful about cliches.

The idea that firearms could sort of undermine magic is kind of disturbing for me... the Legend is eternal, but with such changes in the world... it sort of saddens my heart...

Once again, excellent work.

I don't think that Viserys's wife was ever mentioned -- who is she?

Yay, new chappie! And certainly long and plot-developing-chunk-filled enough to make up for the delay! Indeed, you have, as always, captured the reader within the suspense and mystery of the story completely, and I'm slopping at the trough to find out what comes next. Carry on, Tolkein!
Ano

The FD? or mayber Majora. And is Ganandorf back? It wouldn't surprise me. He's like ten cats in one. He's the best. Or mayber Vaati?

OK, 2 things I noticed straight off, that are in danger of falling into a cliche trap.
First: What did the slavers bring the slaves to the city for? They would either use them for labor, or sell them on to others. They would not keep the slaves there just because they are evil, which is what the chapter suggests.
Second: You did a great job putting together Link and Midna's evolving relationship, but this thing you've got going with Daskin and Lynaka (and possibly Erys) is obvious and uncomfortable. Zelda and Horys too.

On the other hand, you did a really good job of telling us who the Bearer of Power is without actually telling us. Also nice job bringing Majacen into the story, it was unexpected but appropriate.

INCREDIBLE! One of the best opening chapters I've read... EVER! It actually felt like I was reading a novel and not a fanfic. Keep this up!