I love it so far! I hope you update soon. (:

very good story hopethere is more to come

LOL, this was a great chapter. I loved the beginning with Martha and Chloe and I love that Lois and Lucy are in the fic. And them talking about Jimmy, haha, that was funny. Update soon! :)

I loved the family bonding. Keep those updates coming.

I liked the way you added Lois and Lucy to the story.

Update soon!

Loved it, the way you brought the Lanes into the story was briliante. I defnitly saw the real Louise in there and loved the girl bonding. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update asap.
Enjoy your day.

I love it! Not to mention that I am the hugest ClarkxChloe shipper. Please update soon!

You don't get good stories like this often! Update quickly! I'm going into withdrawl already!

I love this so much so far! Please update soon!

Good start. If only the show had this. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Good start. If only the show had had Clark kiss Chloe like that. I look forward to the next chapter

Nice start. Chloe didn't have the chance to pull "let's be friends" card.

Loved it, keep up the good work. You captured Chloe's character perfectly.