Perfect in every way! Luv it!

Loved it!

Keep writing!

M.I.

Love love love.

Very nice fic. :)

Wow! This was sexy, angsty, tasteful and well written. I think you captured the characters well and how they'd respond to those feelings. Very nice.

It's good to view a NejiTen story out of the stereotypical(sp?) plots out there. Keep it uuuuuuup!

So beautiful 3

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful. I honestly can't write anymore about how much I loved the way you painted Neji and Tenten, and how their relationship developed, and how they confessed to each other at the end. A lovely fic.

Beauitul. I will say the angst tag somewhat worried me. I was afraid that he was in fact using her for practice. Anyway, I enjoyed this I'm glad it all worked out in the end. I just thought it was sad that someone would be afraid to broach a subject with someone they were intimate with for fear of them leaving. :( That is no way to feel with someone you have sex with.

Lovely image of the last line. Tenten's insecurities and all is potrayed very well. I thoroughly enjoy the girl talk she shared with her friends. And Neji's confession is endearing. Being Neji, I don't think he'll ever confess his love in the conventional way.I'm glad I found this gem.

I liked this story for the most part. Some of your imagery was just amazing, and this felt pretty IC for them. Although the way you bounced around between scenes was a little hard to understand at times, I still enjoyed the story.

That was lovely.

This was really beautifully written and I really liked it, you wrote both of them very very well!

Absolutely stunning! Keep up the good work!

Aww! That was a very nice story. Neji has a weird way of confessing...