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januaryfreeze92
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
Wonderful. You have quite the talent with words.
Candace
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
That was very well done. Very elegant.
kendrat199
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
I loved this little section
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It was not the words he chose, or even the manner in which he spoke them. It was the slight brush of his hand against hers—tactile, human comfort that lasted for half a second—that decided her successful interpretation." It was so metaphorical and symbolic-the piece as a whole, that is- that I felt it impossible to simply "read" through it. Each individual line seemed to be so meaningful to the piece, besides the regular fluidity of a transition, that I easily spent several minutes pondering theories of their intended purpose. I do ♥ Spock and Uhura and there's so many stories that are chiefly Spock's POV and Uhura's, I'm not sure how to classify this one, though the majority seems to be seen through Uhura's lens.

Simply put, I enjoyed your story. Go Spockura!

And Gaila's awesome.
-kendra <3
xLilypadsx
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
I like it.
Although a bit short, elegantly done.
And a different view on Spock and Uhura's relationship.
Great fic, love to hear more from you!
WonWoman Diana
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
Hi there, you sure that this is complete? I could read more here...tis good written and nice...
go ahead write more...

thanks dani
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