O that was so good! I love anything from Matt's POV and i think you really cpatured his emotions from that real long time ago now, such a good story, yay! *sorry had candy earlier*

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This was pretty good. I like how in this and the companion to it, both of your characters have an epiphany. I like how Matt explained why he had been so critical of Jeff, just trying to get him to calm down. This story seemed more coherent at the beginning than it did at the end. In a way it added to the overall effect of being inside Matt's thoughts. In another way it may the fic seem almost chaotic and disjointed. Overall, I thought it was very good.