I liked it. it was so simple, short, and sweet... its pretty hard to find even 2 of the 3 in a story. it says complete, but i think you should keep writing. maybe that was a mistake, maybe u r finished. either way it is wonderful. u should keep going tho. plz do.

hee,so cute! D

I like it. You've inspired me, drabbles on my page now. Check it out, or not. Whatever.

XOXO,

Summer T.

I loved it.

Yeah, I'm unoriginal. whatever.

I'm happy Jacob followed Leah.

You so didn't skip around ..

I love it !

You hardly kipped around to much. It was really good!

Unsure why the tittle is what it is. It skipped around, but I followed it okay. Pretty good. Liked the reference to Jake running away.

Critic

cute but yah, it did skip around a lot