I'm so annoyed with people who think characters - no, PEOPLE - with the natures of Yunalesca and Seymour are pure evil, because they aren't. I'm glad to see someone giving her a sympathetic portrayal for once, showing how she was manipulated by her vengeful, greedy father. Like Seymour, I always felt she was more a product of environment than an actual villain, and you've shown the way in which her intentions are actually noble. Good work.
gODSPEED!

Poor Yunalesca :( She got messed up :( I really like this it covers so much in only two chapters, but doesn't miss a thing! It is great :) Sorry it took so long to get to it, thanks for the reminder, my air unit is leaking so I'm a little preoccupied :( Life. Anyhoo, this is such a good story. but you said Zaon was not on the farplains, why not? I thought he would be. She really got screwed. Maybe you should have a follow up of her meeting her father and kicking his a** lol.
This was really great, short, but i think that made it good too. :) Great job as always your the best

Yay you are doing a FFX story (still can't wait for your ffx2 updates). This is very interesting, its going to be very short though isn't it? Anyway, I cant wait to see what happens :) update son. I love how she came up with the name- Sin