Detail. Detail, detail, and detail; and you've got it~! *Makes a squealy sort of noise as she rejoices*

Well, Night, Blood would make a promise to food. *Nods* That's just how it is. xD That line had me crackin' up. Ha ha. AH. BAD NIGHT, CALLING PEOPLE "THING THIS," AND "THING THAT"! D8 That makes this Night fangirl both sad and happy~.

Paragraph twelve had me slap happy--Night thinking Ishuca attractive. xD Ah, the wording in the...um, tenth sentence I believe...had me confused for a minute. Maybe revise it to, "It was too dumb to even be funny." Er...or do what you want...*Pipes down* A-and..."Its light wasn't only golden hair's or clear eyes' or immaculate skin's light." ...maybe take out the apostrophes in the words?

I NOW AWAIT THE NEXT CHAPTER, YES I DO. :D

Night. I want to snuggle Night whether he's being a complete terd monkey or whether he's being a nice man. All in all, Night is Night. And you did great with Night. My Night fangirl is currently having spasms. :3

I think the last line is really sweet, too~. And how Night thinks Blood is beautiful. It's all very sweet, even in the beginning with his child form and growing up to be the Night that idolizes Blood~.

:3

*Makes an incoherent noise* I would have bashed Amace in the head. :( AND RAPUNZEL. YAAY. :D Rapunzel makes it all better, yes he does.

...oh ho ho, Wild...you little devil, you. *Wiggles finger at*

Ah, it happened again. D: I'm not too confused this time though. You went from dashes to apostrophes. You have a nice flow, and very little mistakes here. It's getting longer as the words go along the page, and that's good. BANZAI. :D

...next is Night. NIGHT. @-@

I feel like I'm being mean saying this--I probably am. I'm sorry. :( When you're typing "Ishucachan", I believe that it's actually "Ishuca-chan", correct? Yes, I believe that's what you mean. I see it in the fourth paragraph. :D Okay. *Smacks self* Also, a few problems with the tense here and there (take the first paragraph, um--the third sentence, at least--where you used "take". I think you mean "took" so it flows with the tense in the overall paragraph). And when someone new talks, remember to start another paragraph. :D

Onto the review, avoiding my con crit. :3 You can ignore that if you want. Ha ha.

Again, your characterization is dead on~. Little Ishuca~! *Squees!* Cute little Ishuca and his tininess, and, and, and! The only way we get anywhere is one step at a time. :3

Ah, and you even got into mentioning Cain. :D Yaay!

I like the way you word things. Still. Easy to understand descriptions and such. And then, and then little Ishuca praying at the end~. E...!

Now I'm fired up! Onwards!

You wouldn't speak French natively by any chance, would you? :D The way you started off in the beginning reminded me of the way Aza-kush did her fanfiction, and she posted all in French before she began posting anything in English. Ha ha. Sorry. xD Had to ask, cause I just noticed the way you put the dashes and stuff. ...yeah, I'm being annoying. SO, REVIEW TIMEZ.

I like the way you characterize Blood. :3 You have a way of wording things, to the point that even I understand. I like it. Pft--being such a child when it concerns veggies. xD How cute. Makes me wanna poke 'em and go, "aw!" And how he worries about Ishuca--aw~. Tee hee. It's very cute, and it's just like him to worry like that. So much for being a cold-hearted demon, huh?

Ah, but half way through the piece you broke off into apostrophes when they spoke, instead of the dashes you used before. A few minor things here and there, but that's about it. :3 I like this piece.

Which means I must scramble to the next chapter~! Ja!