This is a very interesting take on the story, I can't wait to see what you do with it--you have very good ideas so far.

Aw, poor Jane... that ** TOTALLY deserved a punch in the face though. Keep going, again I really liked it XD

Aw poor Jane... i don't know why but I feel much more empathy for her when she speaks in 'our' language. I found Jane Eyre itself so heavy that I couldn't get through it- and this is the girl who read Mansfield Park for FUN.

Please continue, I really like it so far :)