Aw! Now instead of chuckling (as my previous review stated) I am grinning from ear to ear!
Beautiful. There is no other word to describe it. Absolutely beautiful!
Well Done! Keep Writing!
Kamai6

I loved this! It is so cute and well written. I can't believe you can so easily write wonderful one-shots scantily edit them and then slap them online yet they are still better then mine by a mile yet I spend hours (yeah...FINE! Half an hour!) going over mine again and again (when I feel like it) and have them turn out horrible. *shakes fist at people with natural talent*

aww...that was really swet...

That was adorable. Poor James--I can totally picture him in shock! But of course he got over it fast and was ecstatic. I love how Lily was so frank about the "I'll be doing the getting fat part, as well as the delivery part."

Pretty Darn good. Write more! (Too Tired to log into my account, so if you want to reply, PM my account)

after reading basically every other paragraph, i either sighed or squealed.
this was much too cute(:

so sweet :)

Its like...
Thats our child...
I KNOW.
Our little person...
Yeah.
We’re going to be parents, Lily!
Way to go stating the obvious!

Adorable. I love it.

aww, that was very cute. and good. duh

Yes, very adorable. Only thing is, why didn't Lily repair the glass?

this is SO cute!

oh my god! this was so adorable! i love James' expression! haha i laughed outloud at this! so cute! keep up the good work! and please try not to stay away for so long!

:)

aww lovely. is that a beatles song cos i think i have a remake and it would be nice to hear the original. anyways great as always =]

aw. an ugh, I'm watching a beatles anthology right now. 5 discs and one more isc of special features, all beatles.