great story

Again, love the story.


PP

It's too much! The fluff! -dies-
...
-comes back to life-
that wouldn't be good if i died and didn't favorite you as an author. :) this has now confirmed the need to favorite you! so glad to find another SoM fan. lots of love to Georg! ♥ ^-^ you're awesome! loved it!
~KD

I was obviously still just lurking when I read this. I'm reviewing belatedly because I loved this. One of my absolute favourite SOM stories. It's one I re-read, just like your "Forbidden T" series.

Thought I'd let you know. Brilliant.

gorgeous! the whispering in the ear and then the kiss...m i just melted!

please don't stop!
x

Oh this was a lovely story! Thank you! :) It's interesting to see scenes that were not in the movie being written out so well and fits into the story so well! :D

Oh..My...lord...
That could possibly be one of the best written fan-fics I've EVER read. And trust me, I've read ALOT.
Your descriptions where absolutly amazing, and the story was perfect!
I hope to read more from you soon!

Wow. Amazing. You are SO talented!
More, please. :)

Terrific story! Congratulations, you write Maria and Georg simply at perfection. This chapter was full of romanticism. I hope you keep on writing TSOM fiction.

I'm not sure what to say about this chapter. I'm hesitant to use the word perfect because there's probably something that could be at least a little better but honestly I just can't think of anything bad to say here. It was amazing and I loved every single word of it! I'm very sad that you ended the story because I enjoyed it so much but I also understand that if you were to continue it then you'd have no really good place to stop it until you got to their wedding or something and you'd have to come up with more plot. Maybe you could write their second date sometime though? I know you like writing the tension of before they're together but really, if they hadn't had time to be alone since the play then the circumstances would be similar. They'd both be nervous and such. But anyways, back to this story. I absobloominlutely loved it. Great job. Keep writing. :D

Bless you! That was an amazing story - the last chapter was too steamy for words.

I love that Georg was nervous asking her to dinner. He is so vunerable under the Captain mask.

Well done!

hi your story was great and i did not want it to finish. Could you write a sequel or continue the story? Please.
If not could you write a story about Maria meeting Georg's family,some ofthem may like her and some may not. No war please. Thank you and great story.

Wow! That was fabulous! Will there be a sequel? I do hope so.

Thank you for writing this wonderful story. The plot was totally right - Henry V is a perfect choice to capture the captain's character and Maria's initial reaction and eventual understanding was quite well done.
The only jarring note was that I don't think the captain would use 'pet' as a nickname for anyone, even his daughter.

The END??! aw... ;)
Hi again! I think this is my favourite chapter of all-Marias innocence is so perfect when he kisses her. You have done a brilliant job writing this and i really look forward to more of your work... and perhaps continuing this one if you ever feel like it? ;) well done again, and thankyou, from choconat