I really hope you update this awsome story.

oh boy, this is getting good.

o_o;
You go silverbolt, a knight in shining armor to the bitter end XD
What happened to rhinox!
What is he going to do to poor cheetor!?

Each chapter just seems to get more gruesome. Rampage is most certainly smarter than some give him credit for.

Graphic is a very good word to describe what I read. Tis all I can say.

Oh you evil person you, destroying my not-so-much childhood tv show for shame on you! blah blah /flame

Um, that better? Rofl anyways I just love this oh gods he is keeping them alive but for what?!

I'm sorry you didn't get the flames you wanted but personally, I'm enjoying this story!

Rampage makes Tarantulas look sane by comparison. That's my opinion. Unfortunately, he is also very intelligent, and that makes it hard to know what he is planning. This was as creepy as the last chapter.

You probably didn't get flamed because FF has had more detailed torture stories and many darker ones, including this particular fandom. I think the readers have seen it all. Plus the actual Beast Wars stories don't seem to have as many readers as the other incarnations. Too bad, I think it was the best one.

Oh poor silverbolt, I do like the bird dog he is just so sweet to not like him at all would feel like kicking a puppy...
But I like X better and that was truly a amazing chapter, so morbid and dark.

Yes, it is easy to tell you weren't overly fond of them. Not bad job here, it was most definitely gruesome.