This is great. Please update soon.

This is amazing and very well written.

It really feels like experiencing the story of the game again without playing it.

I don't know what the author's been up to since this has been up. I'm sure there are people who would like to see more of the story from the game in this form.

I hope the author bothers to write the next chapter heh

i always wished that someone would put the game on paper so that instead of playing it for the millionth time, i could just read the story. this is brilliant! and very well written! can't wait for the next chapter

I'm sorry it took me so long to review! *Facepalms* I have to check my e-mail more often! Anyway, yes you can call me ERRP. Or Extreme or Rain/Raini or whatever else you think fits my name. Great chapter by the way! :) You really know the game well. You're welcome on the review and, well, at least here at if I get to sad about Zoe's passing I can always... Rewrite the game! XD Anyway, great job.

Zoe! *Wails* They shouldn't have had her in a coma. I liked the story. Good job.