first: wow, that was hot. second: the BEST HP threesome i have ever read, honestly and truly. Loved it. i've read so many appaling fanifcs, it's great to be reminded that there are fricking awesome authors such as you out there. great fic.

This is great, I love Bill and Charlie's characters in this, they seem like fun. Love the little bit at the end, gave me a little giggle!
Steff x

woah well can you say sexy/creepy hince the casual observer part for kinda creepy but all the same kinky and sexy! ^_^

Awesome! Loved it! More 3somes ya? lol Lovely little bit about the observer at the end.

lol! loved the laugh at the end. The casual observer really makes it perfect.

Eww PERVERT - the guy at the end lol

Okay that was hot. Thanks for sharing!

Nice very nice

This was great! There aren't enough threesomes on this site!

~GVSL~

Damn! That was hot. Liked the way you framed it with the casual observer too.

sequel please wish you would keep this story going, thank you