please cotinue

I must say I absolutely ADORE the entire portion of this chapter with Larsa (ZARGABASCH WHERE DO BABIES COME FROM? edfgsdfgsd). I can honestly say I have not laughed so hard in ages. Oh my god, just so Oh. My. God. Combined with last chapter's poor cabbie and an inconsolable Jules... -strains to control another laughing fit- You, sir/madam, have made my week. :3

Overall, I really like this story and idea behind it. I really love that your cast are true to their in-characterness (likely not a word, as the leading man would say, but tsk, necessity is the mother of invention after all), and I find your writing style refreshing and immensely entertaining. I was hooked at the first mention of Balthier and that eternally damnable river gator (killed my Vaan just two days back; in retrospect, I should have seen it coming, what with being my 3rd play through... ;); it would be a shame to have such an immensely amusing piece forever remain incomplete.

I realize it's been about two years now, but... any chance you might update this again? *makes hopeful dreamhare eyes* :3

Brill more i love the duo:D

hahaahahahahahahahahaha lol

poor larsa lol basch acting as the overprotective father of daughter/ actualy son larsa lol

poor larsa though lol

i liked this detailmanship alot teehee!

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This is really neat, I like your idea on the viera lifespan. Hope you update soon.

Dear God, this is amazing. I have never liked the sky pirate duo, but this piece of art managed to turn my view 180 and... I really don't know what to say. Perfection.

The comedy, the witty banter, the metaphors... Everything has that unique feeling that makes you believe the existence of Ivalice.

I will be waiting for more updates very impatiently.

I've been meaning to do this for quite some time now, but I've only just now finished Chaper 5 entirely...

Anyway, great story, humorous -But still serious when needed-, and the characters are in-character for the most part. On that, I only have to say that I think Basch's outburst a bit much. While we never saw him laugh, his uptightness (If even a word) would lead you to believe that he doesn't laugh so freely.

But, I do admit, I'd probably have joined him on the ground had they been having that discussion with myself in the room.

Once again, great job, and I hope for an update. Though, of course, I wish you to keep up your great quality instead.

Great story so far! I'm having alot of fun, looking forward to reading the rest. Thank you so very much for sharing this with all of us!

Please update! I'm in love with this story!