And yet another review for you~

*reads*

"But there are lies." <--would sound better with the beginning if it was "were" not "are" (might just be me though)

'His shoulders are icy,' he thinks and moves up to embrace the other, only to think that his hands are not his hands and the warmth he projects is not his to begin with, much less his to share. <--liked that, definitely *nod*

Adored the ending as well (I mean really)

Though the only thing I noticed is that (in the beginning at least) the use of language was...interesting. I quite enjoy this kind of style (where it's very vague...and *forgetting the word but it's there on the tip of her tongue* but you get what I mean, right? Hopefully?) but there are a few times that there are...very Formal words used, and it seems to 'ground' the fic more, when it doesn't seem like it should be. Not sure if I'm making much sense, but it's only in the beginning, it gets better by the end *nod*

another good fic, though, so keep it up!~

Ohh.. that was immensely cute. And tragic, all in the same blow.. >w< Thank you for this fic.

that was sweet.. in a somewhat depressing kind of way. ^^