|Reviews for Haunted|
| USMA2020 4/22/13 . chapter 1
Poor Peter. I felt so sorry for him, but I loved the story. Good job!
| FelipeMarcusThomas 6/25/10 . chapter 1
My personal view is that this is fine as a stand alone. Regarding the substance of the story, I am reminded of something said by one of the characters in The Last Battle (the Calormene soldier I think): a noble friend is the best gift of all, a noble enemy the second best. Peter, as an enemy, would defintely be a noble enemy. Nicely done.
| Kaywells 9/15/09 . chapter 1
Loved it loved it loved it ! Peter is my favorite and i love sib fluff! O! This is just how Peter would think! Brilliant!:)
| Victoria Alatamir Wan 6/29/09 . chapter 1
No, I think this is fine where it is. Awesome job! I'm going to go read the one about Professor Kirke now, so I guess I'll see you there!
| Russet022 6/29/09 . chapter 1
Uh, Peter's dreams are scarier... The imagery was consistent and vivid, though I'm not sure sinisterly is a word... :) One would think it should be, though.
| SpangleyPony 6/28/09 . chapter 1
Poor Peter, this could so easily be true though, given what he's been through. If you are going to write another one, hope you do, I would put it with your other story, otherwise you may as well leave it as is. The third chapter would connect everything together I think. Hope this helps.