... *o* wow... that. was. AMAZING! i was totally not expecting that! so good! great story XD

This was undeniably cute. It's everything I look for in a oneshot like this. A short (somewhat) plot. A steamy sex scene(Ice, ingeniously sexy...) and then a bunch of unbearable cuteness at the end!
I thought this was well thought out, with asking him to marry him through his writing. Just sounds like something Usagi might do.
Though your spelling was flawless, it was your grammar that was slightly messed up. I noticed you used a few words in the wrong context.
"...Usagi-San bended down..."
Should probably be
"...Usagi-San bent down..."
That way the sentence flows better.
I love this story! If you ever decide to write some sort of sequel, tell me!
(Possible spoilers below, as a small warning.)
@Unsociable Toddler
First of all, that's completely rude, How could you write something so mean? That can't even be considered a review.
Second of all, how do YOU know Misaki would never say "** Me"? With confidence Misaki is able to do a lot of embarrassing things,he chose between "fingers or mouth" remember? He got the guts to say I love you, and even basically admitted that he WANTED Usagi-San in one of the recent updates on mangafox. He told Sumi that Usagi-San was HIS. So, why not have him scream "** me" in ecstasy? I think he was rather in character, and that Misaki's embarrassment on the subject made this fanfic so much cuter.

Gomenasai Lisse08, I sort of turned half of this review into pointless spam at Unsociable Toddler. Sorry, I just thought her views were completely wrong.
Anyways, congratulations on writing such a cute (but so sexy little lemon scene) Fanfic~
Signed, (Gotsa a problem with me signing my name? Lotsa people do it so I figured, hey! What they hell why not?)
Truth-Kills

Aw, that was so-o-o-o-o-o cute!

Very good short story ^ ^ bravo.

Ahaha yayy xD say yes damn it >=3
Loved it ^^ faved
~♥

Aaww.. So cuutee~ x3

Hurhur.. Nowaki must propose Hiro-san too~ (and quick) xD

I wish there's someone out there as romantic as Usagi-san.. *mwahahaha*

How did you figure that out? That is so adorable. A friend of mine is trying to figure out the perfect way to propose to his girlfriend of three years. Maybe this would be a good idea. lol. Awesome story.

DID HE SAY YES!? HE BETTER HAVE! MAN! YOUR MEAN TO STOP IT THERE! COLD MAN! REALLY COLD!

..cool!

^/^ that was so cute! Is the 108 roses thing really true?
You did a good job, but there was some spelling errors.
G'luck on your next peice! ^^

aww really sweet/hot 5 min read! thanx :P

@UnsociableToddler
I TOTALLY understand that I'm not a good writer! I'm writing for fun, a hobby! NOT FOR profit! There are lots of OOC fics. If you have problem about my writing, don't read then! I'd appreciate it if you'd help me more with CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms and not this kind of flaming. Thank you.

Right. If i can just say, i thought this was TERRIBLE.
You got a load of words wrong, tons of typos, And overall, it was just **.
I think, you should never, ever, ever write fics, ever again. Seriously. This was just.. so **. God.

And Misaki would NEVER say, "** my harder!" He just wouldn't. NO. NO. NO NO NO. ** that. You're the worst fanfic-author, i've ever, ever seen. This was so ** **.

Please, refrain from ever making a fanfic again, and make this world a better place. (:

--Unsociable Toddler.

108 baby romantica...i heard of that. but i never heard of anyone giving them to ask in hand for marridge...nice story. the "scene" was good...pleasurable. thanks goodness i`m used to this kind of "scene"...no nosebleed !

That was really cute. Is it true about the 108 roses though? Does it really mean that, or did you make it up? The only thing I can say that was not done very well was the fact that there were a lot of mistakes in your word structure. Many words that are not plural and don't even have a plural form, were made into plural words. For example, works. 'Works' is to be used in a sentence where something, for instance, 'works' well. But people do not go to 'works' and the do not have 'works'. They go to 'work' and have 'work'. Other than that, the idea was good and the smut was well written. Good job!