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Vi-Violence
2009-11-14 . chapter 13
pretty good, you you really need to fix the grammar
Luiz4200
2009-09-02 . chapter 13
"I swear you, we don't met for the last time!" the angry man said and disappeared in the darkness of the room.

I'm disappointed Frederic forgot it all but I hope he'll be reminded in the sequel this part of the fic makes me believe will come.
Luiz4200
2009-08-31 . chapter 12
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe. I hope they get their right voices back. Please update.
Luiz4200
2009-08-28 . chapter 11
Interesting how some stories have people only learning about side effects when it's too late and how I yet see myself surprised whenever I find one of them. Please update.
Luiz4200
2009-08-23 . chapter 10
Good turn of events. Please update.
Luiz4200
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
"I have an idea!" Frederic said.

"That's no surprise for me now!"

Not indeed. Please update.
Luiz4200
2009-08-13 . chapter 8
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe. Frederick being a better driver than Jake. Funny. And that part where all humans at the Island had to wear blindfolds and ear plugs. Wouldn't it be easier telling them to wait outside? Please update.
Luiz4200
2009-08-05 . chapter 7
With all of this mess will the whole humanity learn about the dragons?
Luiz4200
2009-07-19 . chapter 4
Please update. This is getting so interesting.
Luiz4200
2009-07-12 . chapter 3
Great chapter. Jonathan goes deeper into the magical world. Is Rose still in Hong Kong?
Luiz4200
2009-07-06 . chapter 2
Please update. Is Chang involved?
Luiz4200
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Please update. Is Chang trying to capture Spud?
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