*Lets out a whoop of joy* Oh yes! Ha, ha. You nailed it! You had the two characters spot on in what they'd say to each other in this kind of moment not to mention it seems like a total canon written moment too (authentic and all that jazz).

I don't know much about the challenge, all I know is that this story makes me laugh. "I don't need you," "But you WANT this," Ha, ha. That was priceless and very in character of Roshaun to say that. Nice.

Toodles,

-Don "QuixoticQuest" ^_^

hm im not sure what to think of this,but it sound interesting so far
please continue!

aw! it's so cute! it's very well done. i loved every bit of it. dang, i wish roshaun didn't have to disappear.

nice

Excellent job! I loved this. It's hard to find DairinexRoshaun without them being OOC - you did a great job at making it cute while they're still in character.

*sigh* that was too sweet, and i liked their characters!

Great writing! You managed to keep two very strong characters in character while inserting them into a very vulnerable moment.

cool.

You've written this really well, and you've got both of them in character, wow you're good.
Eve