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melody
2009-11-15 . chapter 9
Wow good work ladys ;~) I like this chapter a lot...my girls say hello...hope ur doin well chrissy ...hope 2 talk 2 u soon
lizardmomma
2009-11-13 . chapter 9
very good job guys. I really wish Elenia wasn't on the war path but I don't think that anything is going to stop her besides Steve. I am glad that Michael didn't kill Wyatt even though he really wanted to. That was a cute banter with him and Piper calling each other grandma and grandpa. The head of the Ashton was impressed by Chris, that is a good thing. I can't wait to see what you do in the next chapter.
weiliya
2009-11-13 . chapter 9
I like it I like it I like it. Great Christopher! makes me sad he's got to go back to the future
Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang)
2009-11-13 . chapter 8
Hey everyone...

Thanks again for your reviews. You really always make us smile. Thanks so much!

@latinpoet/melody: Glad you liked that chapter so much. And yeah there is a lot of stuff going on in both timelines...

@lizardmomma: Glad you liked that chapter. About Elenia... well I guess she already is almost broken by the envents. We'll see how things will turn out in the end.

@FirePony16: Glad you liked it... And yeah somehow the future scenes are funny touch. (That was Kiriana's doing, by the way, she has has a great way to write such scenes... *wink*)

Ok... The new chapter should be up soon... Personal replies to your reviews will follow later today or tomorrw since I'm kind of busy right now... Oh and Chapter 10 will be uploaded on Friday, December 4th.

*hugs* And thanks again!
Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang-member)
FirePony16
2009-10-26 . chapter 8
The first part is very clever about passing on information. The scence with Wyatt are funny and awesome. My favorite lines are- "Has Wyatt called you?" he asked, closing the door behind him. Piper looked at him, suspiciously.
"No. I haven't spoken to him almost all day. Why?" she asked, as she headed toward the dinning room.
"Just curious. This smells great! You outdid yourself again," he said, quickly changing the subject as they entered the kitchen. Of course she wasn't taking it.
"Chris..." Everyone in the kitchen was watching them, wondering what was going on.
"Mom..." he started, then nodded toward his younger self.
"Future consequences," she and her sisters all said together, shaking their heads. A suspicious look formed on Cole's face, who was wondering what was going on. Moments later Kyle came in through the kitchen door, looking exhausted, and went straight to Paige and kissed her on the cheek, causing Jim to make a face. Everyone smiled at this, some thinking, typical teenager. Then the doorbell rang before the older Chris had to answer any more questions.
"Saved by the bell," his younger self said, smiling at himself, knowing Piper wasn't about to let it go. Everyone in the room then turned to him. "I don't know anything! Future consequences, remember?" he said, defensively.

I had a good laugh when I read that. :)
Wonder chapter, lookin forward to the next update, hope its soon. :)
lizardmomma
2009-10-26 . chapter 8
Very good job guys. I can believe that Elenia would do what Pheobe forsaw. I also know that it would destroy her to know she kills her own son. I hope that Michael doesn't kill Wyatt. It wouldn't be good for his grandkid to grow up with out a father.
hhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiii
2009-10-25 . chapter 8
Hey chrissy n kirianna (nice 2 meet u kirianna) I loved this weeks chapter it was crazy so as for michael he's buggin lol wyatt would kick his ** lol n elenia she's slowly turnin evil hehehe I love it...n I don't want steve 2 die I hope they save him...gr8 work ladys *hugs*...bye. melody
Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang)
2009-10-23 . chapter 7
Hello friends.

First things first... Well as those who review already know, we PMed you with a question. And you decided. In the end it was a 2 to 1 for keeping to the three weeks rhythm, and that's how we will do it. The last chapters of this story will all posted every three weeks. And I hope the one who was for the other option isn't too disappointed.

But now to your reviews:

@latinpoet/melody: Thanks for your review... Yeah, I guess Elenia has too much to deal with right now, so that she lost herself a little... Oh and... it's not only me writing, Kirianna is still there with me as well...*wink*

@lizardmomma: Thanks for your review and your concern about us. But yeah I feel better, thanks. Well about Elenia, yeah this is definitely worrying, isn't it? *wink*

@FirePony16: Thanks for your review. Glad you like how Wyatt behaved in that scene... I liked that, too... *smile*

Ok... so the new chapter will be up soon... within the next minutes. And chapter 9 will follow on Friday November 13th... Oh wow... Friday 13th... What a nice date... *wink*

Thanks again for reviewing and for your patience and of course for all your support. Thanks so much!

Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang-member)
FirePony16
2009-10-05 . chapter 7
Excellent chapter, the funniest part was how Wyatt was acting in the second part. That was so awesome. Lookin forward to the next update. :)
lizardmomma
2009-10-05 . chapter 7
Very nice job guys, Got a lot sorted out, but have so much more to go. I hope that everyone is feeling better. I am worried about what Eleania might do in her haste and fear.
melody
2009-10-04 . chapter 7
Hey chrissy good story I like it...it seems elenia isn't very elder like lately that's cool... n I hope steve finds his way back soon...sorry for the short review but I'm a bit busy wit my kids...keep up the gr8 work I love ur story...*HUGS*
Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang)
2009-10-02 . chapter 6
Oh my Goodness... Where that really 3 weeks already? D*mned!

Hello friends and fans...

I'm so sorry that I couldn't contact you sooner, but the last two weeks I had been sick I had been down with the cold and wasn't able to get ecen near my computer... And I'm really glad I could come here today to update and reply to your wonderful reviews.

@latinpoet: Thanks... Well... You won't find out much about Wyatt's and Julia's baby, I'm sorry... but maybe at another point... But I'm glad you liked the chapter so far...

@lizardmomma: Thanks... Well... I'm glad you liked the chapter... and yes, Excalibur will be play it's role, soon...

@FirePony16: Thanks... Well... I'm glad you liked Wyatt's reaction... And I hope you'll like how this will turn out as well...

Ok friends... The new chapter will be up as soon as I can get it up... And - sadly, but because I was sick so long which put all our work on hold again - chapter 8 will be again posted in three weeks inseatd of two, means on Friday, October 23rd.

Thanks again for your patience... and of course for all your support.

*hugs*
Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang-member)
FirePony16
2009-09-17 . chapter 6
Awesome chapter, loved Wyatt's reaction to Julia's news. Lookin forward to the next chapter. :)
lizardmomma
2009-09-16 . chapter 6
Very good job guys. Steve was human for a sec..that's interesting. Excalibur had to become more important to the story at some point.
latinpoet
2009-09-12 . chapter 6
Hey chrissy I liked the chapter its good that steves rememberin I can't wait for his return to the humans...n I'm lookin forward to c what wyatts baby can do...I was hopin to c more julian n balthezar but outside side of that great chapter...lata melody
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