 FirePony16 2009-10-26 . chapter 8The first part is very clever about passing on information. The scence with Wyatt are funny and awesome. My favorite lines are- "Has Wyatt called you?" he asked, closing the door behind him. Piper looked at him, suspiciously.
"No. I haven't spoken to him almost all day. Why?" she asked, as she headed toward the dinning room.
"Just curious. This smells great! You outdid yourself again," he said, quickly changing the subject as they entered the kitchen. Of course she wasn't taking it.
"Chris..." Everyone in the kitchen was watching them, wondering what was going on.
"Mom..." he started, then nodded toward his younger self.
"Future consequences," she and her sisters all said together, shaking their heads. A suspicious look formed on Cole's face, who was wondering what was going on. Moments later Kyle came in through the kitchen door, looking exhausted, and went straight to Paige and kissed her on the cheek, causing Jim to make a face. Everyone smiled at this, some thinking, typical teenager. Then the doorbell rang before the older Chris had to answer any more questions.
"Saved by the bell," his younger self said, smiling at himself, knowing Piper wasn't about to let it go. Everyone in the room then turned to him. "I don't know anything! Future consequences, remember?" he said, defensively.
I had a good laugh when I read that. :)
Wonder chapter, lookin forward to the next update, hope its soon. :) |
 lizardmomma 2009-10-26 . chapter 8Very good job guys. I can believe that Elenia would do what Pheobe forsaw. I also know that it would destroy her to know she kills her own son. I hope that Michael doesn't kill Wyatt. It wouldn't be good for his grandkid to grow up with out a father. |
 hhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiii 2009-10-25 . chapter 8 Hey chrissy n kirianna (nice 2 meet u kirianna) I loved this weeks chapter it was crazy so as for michael he's buggin lol wyatt would kick his ** lol n elenia she's slowly turnin evil hehehe I love it...n I don't want steve 2 die I hope they save him...gr8 work ladys *hugs*...bye. melody |
 Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang) 2009-10-23 . chapter 7 Hello friends.
First things first... Well as those who review already know, we PMed you with a question. And you decided. In the end it was a 2 to 1 for keeping to the three weeks rhythm, and that's how we will do it. The last chapters of this story will all posted every three weeks. And I hope the one who was for the other option isn't too disappointed.
But now to your reviews:
@latinpoet/melody: Thanks for your review... Yeah, I guess Elenia has too much to deal with right now, so that she lost herself a little... Oh and... it's not only me writing, Kirianna is still there with me as well...*wink*
@lizardmomma: Thanks for your review and your concern about us. But yeah I feel better, thanks. Well about Elenia, yeah this is definitely worrying, isn't it? *wink*
@FirePony16: Thanks for your review. Glad you like how Wyatt behaved in that scene... I liked that, too... *smile*
Ok... so the new chapter will be up soon... within the next minutes. And chapter 9 will follow on Friday November 13th... Oh wow... Friday 13th... What a nice date... *wink*
Thanks again for reviewing and for your patience and of course for all your support. Thanks so much!
Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang-member) |
 FirePony16 2009-10-05 . chapter 7Excellent chapter, the funniest part was how Wyatt was acting in the second part. That was so awesome. Lookin forward to the next update. :) |
 lizardmomma 2009-10-05 . chapter 7Very nice job guys, Got a lot sorted out, but have so much more to go. I hope that everyone is feeling better. I am worried about what Eleania might do in her haste and fear. |
 melody 2009-10-04 . chapter 7 Hey chrissy good story I like it...it seems elenia isn't very elder like lately that's cool... n I hope steve finds his way back soon...sorry for the short review but I'm a bit busy wit my kids...keep up the gr8 work I love ur story...*HUGS* |
 Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang) 2009-10-02 . chapter 6 Oh my Goodness... Where that really 3 weeks already? D*mned!
Hello friends and fans...
I'm so sorry that I couldn't contact you sooner, but the last two weeks I had been sick I had been down with the cold and wasn't able to get ecen near my computer... And I'm really glad I could come here today to update and reply to your wonderful reviews.
@latinpoet: Thanks... Well... You won't find out much about Wyatt's and Julia's baby, I'm sorry... but maybe at another point... But I'm glad you liked the chapter so far...
@lizardmomma: Thanks... Well... I'm glad you liked the chapter... and yes, Excalibur will be play it's role, soon...
@FirePony16: Thanks... Well... I'm glad you liked Wyatt's reaction... And I hope you'll like how this will turn out as well...
Ok friends... The new chapter will be up as soon as I can get it up... And - sadly, but because I was sick so long which put all our work on hold again - chapter 8 will be again posted in three weeks inseatd of two, means on Friday, October 23rd.
Thanks again for your patience... and of course for all your support.
*hugs*
Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang-member) |
 FirePony16 2009-09-17 . chapter 6Awesome chapter, loved Wyatt's reaction to Julia's news. Lookin forward to the next chapter. :) |
 lizardmomma 2009-09-16 . chapter 6Very good job guys. Steve was human for a sec..that's interesting. Excalibur had to become more important to the story at some point. |
 latinpoet 2009-09-12 . chapter 6Hey chrissy I liked the chapter its good that steves rememberin I can't wait for his return to the humans...n I'm lookin forward to c what wyatts baby can do...I was hopin to c more julian n balthezar but outside side of that great chapter...lata melody |
 Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang) 2009-09-11 . chapter 5 Hey everyone...
I'm sorry this is so late. Things went a little crazy over here... But I'm here and will upload the new chapter ASAP.
Thanks to all who read an reviewed our story... thanks so much...
@Firepiny: Yeah I have to admit it was a little predictable... but I'm glad you like it.
@latinpoet: Glad to hear you are alright. And don't apologize, that's life. About the new baby-Halliwell, well... I'm really glad you liked that chapter, and the caring Belthazor *wink*... I don't think we'll find out much about him or her in the next chapters, but maybe we'll meet that caracter in one of the future stories... But really we have nothing planed yet.
@lizardmomma: Well as I said to the others, it was a little bit predictable that Julia is pregnant, and I doubt we'll find out much about the baby during this story, because there is other more important stuff right now... But no one knows what our future stories may bring... Oh and thanks for the rain... Well not that we have rain, but at least we have some clouds now and the temperature went down to 25°C...
Well it cooled down here a bit but still we are a little behind with the fiction, so we again will upload the next chapter in 3 weeks instead of 2... but we hope this will be the last time...
thanks for your patience...
Now I'm going to upload Chaoter 6 and chapter 7 will follow on Friday October 2nd...
*hugs* and thanks again.
Chrissy.W.x (crazyDFFgang-member) |
 lizardmomma 2009-08-24 . chapter 5I hope that you all can escape the heat. I'd send you our rain if I could, it rained every day of June and most days in July and so far it's been an off and on again rainy Aug. I had a feeling that Julia was wanting to say that she was pregnant, can't wait to see if you have her little one showing powers. I couldn't believe the reaction that Elenia was having. Boy did she overreact. Drama queen...sorry. I don't normally even use that term :) Things are getting interesting. Keep up the good work guys... |
 hi 2009-08-23 . chapter 5 Hey chrissy I'm here sorry bout no review for chapter 4 the kids had me busy runnin around... so I love chapter 5 I hate elenia so ur doin ur job...lol... I wanted nikkie to slap her ggls.. n balthezor was so sweet n caring I loved that...wow a new baby halliwell cool I hope it has lots of cool powers. I c we have to wait three weeks for the next chappie its gonna be antsie lol ill wait tho...keep workin I'm a loyal reader who's goin no where...bye...melody |
 FirePony16 2009-08-22 . chapter 5I was right, she was pregnant. Awesome chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. |