Its really good keep it coming

another great chappie! love it and cant wait for more !

hey, great chapter... is this meant to be bd compliant? coz if so billy already knows that jake imprinted but meh, *waves hand* dont matter, great anyway!

This is really good! Plz write more! :)

This was really good and i really liked it but wre you supposed to say "theres a reason for me and BELLA to be here" coz i think you might meant to put Nessie's name instead of Bella bella. But I Loved It

plz let there be more

heyy! great chapter... although i was looking for more of a fight from eddie! kl... also do you think you could check out my other ones as well? see you soon x

AWW! jake's awesome!! i love the pairing!

Please update soon. I love it. :)

i love this story so far

love it update soon

What is there to say about this chapter? Oh, I think know...

OMG I AM ADDICTED TO THIS MORE THAN MY 13 YR OLD COUSIN IS ADDICTED TO CIGARETTS! YOU BETTER WRITE MORE OR ELSE I WILL SEND MY ARMY OF 50 KITTENS TO BITE YOUR TOES AND FINGERS OFF IN THE NIGHT AND USE YOUR BLOOD TO WRITE ON THE FLOOR "WRITE MORE NOW OR WE WILL BE BACK."

SIX stories!?!?!/ wtf! anyway, great chappy and loved eddie's reaction

That was... interesting. Well, let's just say I've never heard a story like that. Pretty good. Keep on doing what you're doing!!

yay i loved it because guess what... dun dun da! not much happened!! (thats a good thing because it wasnt a rollercoaster ride and you padded!)
great job hun, looking forward to more and wednesday!