Why are all the GOOD stories ongoing!!?
I swear, every time I find a good story, it's ongoing!
And your story is one of them
I look forward to the next chapter

Yay! I love Minh, she's like an un-annoying Mao. lol I hope the next chapter will have a bit of Haji in it...or not, I love suspense. =D

Ja!
~Hajislover

Wow! The story is very nice. I would've never thought of making David and Julia's son as one of the twins boyfriends; let alone having Joel clone himself. But please continue; I'm interested as to how Saya and Haji will meet again.
LUNAR-W0LF

every time i read things like this it always seems like it could b the actualstory

So she's leaving. Does she have any idea where to go?? I can picture her just roaming around the world looking for him, and he's in the exact opposite place. Hahaha

'Can't wait for chapter five! ^_^

0.0 oh wow...OUTSTANDING!! I...I'm completely speechless. That was...wow! Haji...then Saya...an-and she's so sad...and HAJI!! Poor, poor, beautiful Haji...-sigh-

Amazing. I hope I can leave a better review for the next chapter lol

aww, poor haji. cant wait to read more :D

･ﾟ･(ノД`)･ﾟ･ *cry*
poor hagi ,stupid hagi
saya would accept you no matter how you looks like...
However, I like it.(abuse hagi 囧~)
I think I am a pervert somehow...

I love it

Nice work on this one, your English is quite good, I only saw a few minor errors.

OH~I like this fanfic!^^

Both the idea that Kai became Saya's chevalier in a SxH story, and the assumption that chevaliers can't disobey their Queen when the Queen's eyes turn to bright color are creative, and I like them so much. Otherwise, the Saya and the Kai in your fic are just like the onces in blood+(or almost are like in Blood+). That is good~XD

English isn't my mother language, either. I do have learned it but not good in it at all.ˊ_ˋ

i enjoyed ur first chapter. dont worry about the mistakes. everyone makes them XD
i look forward to reading more of the story ^-^