aww sorry to see you go I liked this one.

it's great so far!Update soon!

I like it, it is just basically a romance story using the names from Torchwood so far but you never know?
Carry on, I will be reading.

hehe yay for fluff!

Aww! I like it so far! <3

LOVED IT!!
pure genius once again.
please update soon- its so cute to think they're a normal couple and in love. series 3 starts next week!! :D:D:D:D:D
SO EXCITED. happy writing,
anna x

This is getting really good, I can just imagine Gwen complaining Jack is messy :) Please update soon !

aw so sweet. luv the chapter!

I loved how they got srpung with paint handprints everywhere :)Looking forward to see how it progresses & if we get a cameo from the gorgeous Sammy Tyler :D

I liked the chapter is was cute & fun.

great start & we need more Gwen and Jack on the site!

OMG, love it.
pure genius, please update a.s.a.p
happy writing,
AnaTW x

Loving this so far. Can't wait for more.

nice. I love that Jack is a DI - upped his non TW status about 100x. I don't watch many British police shows(I'm Australian) so when I read DI I always think of Sam Tyler - so love him. So that quirked my interest even more

I always love stories with Jack & Gwen and this one has made an interesting start.How no one seems to belong to TW has thrown me a bit though - not up on alot of the terminology here - is that what AU means?