mnn...poetic...

*sighs happily*

Awesome story! Do you want to send it to my site so that other people can see it?it would make your story really popular and i would really apreciate it! my e-mai lis and my website is . ! you can also send in any other stuff that you have and even fanart! thanks!

Pretty good, very interesting...

The language in this is wonderful! So, this is your first entry? It's very shway! You should try writing a full out novel of a Pokemon story... I'm sure it would turn out awesomely. Seriously, if anyone flames ya because of this, I'll go beat em' up... it's very ace. _