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Sapphire Blue Ninja 6/26/09 . chapter 1
"Miaka. That's Mee-Ack-A! Just don't ask me how to write it. I don't know."

Isn't that just the cutest line ever? But, one thing... "onee-san" is for older sisters. "Onii-san" is for older brothers. :)

And I like your writing style. Your grammar's good.
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