dude i am so pissed at John right now! great story.

Great story! I can sooo see Dean and Sam acting this way...especially at the end. I'm going to go read your other stories now!

I like it

Awesome story. I am hope there will be a seacond one to this story. It is to good to leave it where it is at. I would love to know what Cas is having John find out about Dean and Sam. Please write another story to this one. Please

love it

I hope there's more of this 'verse to come, even though the series is way past this on TV. You've really got Dean and Sam down just right!

This one was great, too. All the characters were very convincing; just right on their voices and motivations!

Interesting premise. It's also interesting that, since you begin some of your stories with unexplained scenarios, you get to stipulate a number of things that would otherwise be hard to set up, or would take half the story to get there!

It seriously, SERIOUSLY irks me...John's bloody attitude. *cough* Excuse me. REALLY. Is Sam his only son? What right did he have to bear down on Dean like that? *glares*

I'm so glad that Cas stepped in and Jim told him the truth and it hit him in the face.

Man needs to be fair, sometimes...and stop playing favourites! *huff angrily*

Wow. Surprised John survived stealing the research and knife. Knew Cas had a hand in it! Glad this John can understand Sam can fight the blood unlike theirs who said save or kill. Sequel? How did the other Sam and Dean react to the fact their Dad is gone?

I Love John Wayne :)

I love this story. Very realistic. Excellant characterizations and verbal dialog. I like that you made Pastor Jim 3 dimensional " the angel let me tell you" LOL. And the last chapter with the banter and humor was so Sam and Dean. I just really wish John and Dean talked about thier issues. And John fould explain Adam. Thnx for the awesome read!

Thank you for a fantastic read :)

Wow, just stumbled upon this story, and I loved it. Parallel dimensions can be tricky, but you did great work here. Thanks for sharing.

Okay seriouslt, talk about brilliant. I've alwayd wanted to read a story where John found out about the crap form season 4 and 5 with the angels and the dmeon blood and Dean in hell and Lucifer and shit, so I was super intrigued by your story.

And sure it wasn't /their/ Jonh but in a way it was and it was absolutely awesome and I loved your idea of "how" they got there and how Sam and Dean reacted to seeing them and John and Jim's reactions back to their reactions.

The characters were spot on, absolutely amazingly done. It was like watching an episode and I loved how you had John found out about Sam's addiction and then Dean's time in hell.

And the ending/epilogue sort of was brilliant. Really funny and well jsut plain brilliant. I enjoyed this story a lot and am sort of hoping you'll consider making a sequel to it that follows through seaosn 5 with Sam trying to keep from saying yes to Lucifer and stuff like that and maybe eventually reahcing the seaosn 5 finale where Sam does say yes and loses for a bit and then wins and ends up in the box, but all of that John adde dinto the mix, I think it would be very cool and epic.

But I understand if you don't feel like writing a sequel, but part of me is like you can't leave it like this. I know who the series progresses, but you added a John to this situation and it would be aweosme to read how things could change or merely how John would react to things to come. Especially if Sam were Lucifer, how would that be like with not only Dean but John in the mix.

Anyway ,this story was excellent, you write fantastic, easy to follow, nothing that slows down, characters spot on, you're brilliant and I hope you'll keep writing for a long while XD

Greetz Selene467