Seems good thus far. I loved to see were this goes.

Awesome! Very insightful.

There was something utterly charming about this.

This story had me delighted all the way down to my toes! Fantastic. :)

THIS WAS AWESOME! Excellent expression and a worthy snapshot. BRILLIANT

will you be continuing the story?

Man this is good! This is the kind of thing I really would like to read, but don't find very often, stories about them relating to each other.

Well written. Though its been a while since I read or had any familiarity with the characters, so it took a little while to get used to the senario and remember the background to it.

it's pretty good i hope to read more